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Feed back si always nice> Also i change the way i type it to hopfeull make it more reable.



Later on at 1355 (1:55 pm) in the bunk area, we have Saren and Chase. They are both lying on their sleeping bags, looking up at the tent.
 “Hey, Saren you awake?” Chase asks just to see if he up. 

“I’m alive if that a thing. What up?” Saren replied in a sarcastic way. 

“Have you ever talked to your spirit card? I don’t believe in that stuff but did you have any contact with it?” Chase asks him curiously.  Saren sight.

 “Why did you even ask if you don’t believe that fucking stuff? I’ll indulge you anyway.” Saren replied to Chase in an upset tone.

“(Well he upset a bit)” Chase thought. 

“Yes, Bezel challenges me to a duel which I could not read any word at the time because when you sleep your brain can’t process it that well or for some other fucking reason. Since I won he gave me an award. He would still give me a connection to the same power he uses but he gave me a gift.” Saren said and let in a little bit of info.

 “What is it?” Chase asks with a surprised tone. "

"You sound surprised and you don’t believe in this spirit stuff. Well, shit is you easy to convince or something. Anyway if you hold your “Gotta know right fucking now” horse in time I will tell you.” Saren said in a kind of an annoyed voice. 

“Okay… well anyway, why did you join the army? There has to be a reason.” Chase asks him then Saren had a small grin on his face. 

“Oh want to know eh? That fair you told me your reason. I joined so can get more power and make the mercenary life possible for me.  I know that you don’t this but when the war started mercenary groups started to join or get killed by dark hand. Mostly join. I have a Cousin who is in war who is I guess should be an Arch genesis solider. I wanted to join her group it a small group but she going after them because dark hand did some shit to her and them and now they want payback. Also the union kind of force them to or else they would die so Ya. I just want to get power and kill and be with a powerful team. Mostly killing so I can get good at it so I join my cousin mercenary team or another one.” Saren told him. 

“Shit bro…” Chase replied almost speechless
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“Eh, I don’t mind it. I like or don’t mind 90% of the team. The 10% begging JT too freaking nice and shit.” 

Saren said. “Oh…Uh, what about Giovanni?” Chase asks sounding intrigued. 

“He is fine I kind of like him and he still trying to find his own way it seems. Maybe I am wrong about that but anyway he cool. If you want to know how I feel about everyone on Yuri team I am 90% okay with. Saddie is a no because she seems like the type to not handle things well when reality steps in and a bit too energetic for my taste. I think I saw two other guys that I don't know that was near or with Yuri team a lot before we left them so I would have to correct myself and say 70% because those two are unknown." Saren said in a layback type of tone.

"Eh, maybe he does have some extra people. His team is not filled up completely for sure, I know you did not ask but after we win the war I am going back home." Chase told Saren to inform him.

"Well just hope there is a home to go. Also,  just try not to die that would be helpful." Saren says in a sarcastic voice. 

Chase laughs a bit and both of them just stay there on their sleeping bags looking up at the end as other people pass them by and as some people duel on the table with safety field up. 

Green Totem 03 same day

David, Cameron, and Daniel are in the bunk bed area doing their own thing since they just got done with their patrol of the day. Daniel was trying out combos with his deck. 

"Hey, Daniel do you hate me?" David asks him since it on his mind.

"No, I don't.  Are you asking because I yelled at you? If so I would have replied yes and be meaner about. I act like that for your own good."  Daniel replied in a serious tone.

"You have to be mean, though? I am sure ou could be nicer about it." Cameron stated in his comment.

"You'll understand sooner or later I'm sure of it. Anyway, you guys said you could not drive. Did you get qualified to drive or no because In during training we go on vehicle simulators of how ti would be to drive the vehicles? depending on how good you are on your profile it will show if you are qualified if you are able to drive or not. All training locations are supposed to do that." Daniel asks them a good question will still going through his combos.

"Son of a bitch! I knew they did not have their shit together. No, they never put us on those. Damn, we were like rob of our training." Cameron said in anger. 

"Even though he not in charge of it is possible for you can go tell Major Fox he can send in a complaint about it to the people in charge if the training base is over here. What was your training place anyway?" Daniel memntion and ask in curiosity.

"Freaken training base Flip jax. It offcail that place is stupid as hell. Can you tell us what else every training base is suppsoe to get? We had weapons, combat, and regular work out training, martail arts, power training, duel time that where we duel,  We only got one two hours of sleep, target pratice, and 2 meals a day lunch and dinner,  If we have a lossing streak of 6 loses we are kick out if we lose a duel agiast some other trainee and if they lose they are kick out. I sent three guys home which I did not want to do and i fucking hated it! I knew they had no place left to go but I was worried what would happen if I went back home aka the other earth! Do you understand." David said in anger.

"Yes I do understand that why you need to go tell him. They are not allowed to kick you out on your win/lose streak that what the test are for if you dueling is not good or you deck is crap. They are suppose to give you guys card packs some places it once a month others are once ever other week and they are suppose to feed you three times a day.  He will tell you that all he can do is report it then it up to the people who are in charge of the training for Genesis soliders to take care of it." Daniel told them in a sterin but not anger voice.

"Come on David let's go." Cammeron told david.

They went off and they where kind of storming off.  They kind of huried. When they got to Major Fox door they Cameron knock on it.
"Sir Green totem team memember 008 Camerona and 009 David, We need to talk to you Sir." Cameron said in a kind of high and pissy tone.

The door opened and they stromed walked ot him. Major is fox is kind of concered.

"What the matter you seems piss?" Major fox ask in a concern voice.

"Sir we wish to file a report on on our training base Flip jax sir." David said in a serious voice. 

"Okay, okay calm down a bit. I can only file a report that it. it up tot eh ones in charge of it what to do with it. Luckly he is here so I can do it, Sit down." Major fox said in a serious voice.

David and Cameron took some deep breaths and sat down on a chair.

"Sir sorry sir." David replied.

"It fine just try to control your emontions. *The Major  Went on his messager system to send a compress fiel report to the general which is in charge of it* Now then what wrong with it? The major ask them.

They told him  everything that was wrong and what the place was missing.  They went throw it throughly.  After that he sent it the e-mail. The Major then told him he sent it.

" Sir How long before a repily sir?" David asks wondering how long they have to wait. 

"No clue. The general is focus on a major attack that will happen soon so I have no clue. I hope you understand he is very busy." Major fox explained to them.

"Sir oh yes if he planing for a major attack I completly understand how imporant it is.  Well thank you sir." Cameron said and offers a hand shake.


both of them shook hands and  left feeling they have done something very good.

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I feel like no one was able to read this so I am commenting so people can.

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Nice to see you took my advice to heart. Now what I'd suggest... Well I'd say get something to work on grammer and spelling (and I'm one to preach, and by that I mean I suck),  you can use a program like grammerly to do spell/grammar checks or you can get an editor. I kinda use both ( but my editor is my mom so I'm not sure she she counts)

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I did use grammerly i just did not by the upgrade

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You can always find a Grammar Nazi xD

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lol

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