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YU-GI-OH! THE RESURRECTION OF ZEXAL


Description: This is a loosely based Yu-Gi-Oh! Fan-Fiction, using elements from the Yu-Gi-Oh Zexal II series but fallows an Original Story line and a new cast of Characters. Also note there is some profanity regarding language in this story as it uses dialogue from the real life counterparts of the Characters.




Exposition: "Yu-Gi-Oh! The Resurrection of ZEXAL" has a series of events that take place before this one and as such there will be quite a bit of mystery of what has lead up to this point. 


Other: This is my first ever attempt at Fan Fiction so if anyone has any tips or advice please comment




Characters: Here is a list of Characters you will get to see throughout the story: 
(Credit for Character Creator Art goes to http://www.rinmarugames.com/game/?game_id=421 )
 
Don Thousand/Mesktoth
YuGiOh! Resurrection of ZEXAL Chapter 1 Meskto10
Condread Selstar 


BARIAN FORM:

YuGiOh! Resurrection of ZEXAL Chapter 1 Condre11


Etzio Driez


KIRIN FORM:
YuGiOh! Resurrection of ZEXAL Chapter 1 Etzio10



Vyukara Shadowes
ASTRAL FORM:
YuGiOh! Resurrection of ZEXAL Chapter 1 Vyukar10



CHAPTER 1: The Genocide King Returns?




[Open to a concert just outside Domino City where rock music is being played by the band Circus Freaks and Dream Catchers. The Crowd is cheering and singing right along with the main show] 




Condread:  "Your land of the free was a fallacy, Your Home of the Brave was a masquerade!"

[Condread Sings Lead and plays Keyboard while Etzio and Vyukara are playing guitar with amazing skill as the concert seen goes to a close and we find our trio backstage]

Condread: "Awesome! Another great show guys!"
Vyukara: "You know it!"
Etzio: "Definitely!'
Vyukara: "So what’s up for the rest of the night?"
Condread: "Not sure, we could go sign some stuff"
Vyukara: "We could head back to the hotel and finish up our duel, we were in another stalemate as always Condread"
Etzio: Dude, "I’m exhausted! I'm more tired now than I was on the Night of Red Sky"
Condread: "How can you be tired than the Night of Red Sky we literally used all our Zexals and sent Don Thousand-"

[Condread cut off by Vyukara mid sentence]

Vyukara: "Mesktoth"
Condread: "Mesktoth into-"

[Condread Now Cut off by Etzio with a frustrated expression as Vyukara simply chuckles to himself]

Etzio: "Aright I get it we sent Mesktoth into Oblivion and turned all his Dark Soul army back into Astrals Barians and Kirins and they all went back to our world and so on"
Vyukara: "How much?"

[As the trio begin to all grin with good memories on their faces]

Condread: "How much fucking do I owe you for this?"

[The trio laugh and Vyukara nearly collapsed from laughing and bumping into a table]

Etzio: "That’s never gonna get old, is it?"
Vyukara: "Nope."
Condread: "Well if you're that tired we could head back to the hotel room"
Etzio: We better not get mobbed like last time, thanks Vyukara"

[As Etzio sends a death stare at Vyukara]

Vyukara: "Hey!, I didn't know they would be out back too"
Condread: "Well if we don't want to get mobbed we better find a different way out."
Etzio: "Like what, flying out? It’s not like I have my wings here."
Condread: "You've been at that for almost 3 years now "
Etzio: "So? That’s about as old as you are now, right?"
Condread: "I thought I told you to knock it off with that joke."
Etzio: "That’s an opinion"
Condread: "Yes and I-"

[As the tension raises between Condread and Etzio cut off by Vyukara]

Vyukara: "Um guys"
Condread & Etzio: "What!!!?"
Vyukara: "Is it me or is it kind of quiet?"



[As the trio realize there was no noise from the crowds and all the workers backstage were nowhere to be found]

Etzio: "Hey, you’re right."

[Condread walks out to peer into the main floor of the Venue]

Condread: "Better question, where’s the crowd?"

[As Etzio and Vyukara come out to join him to stare into the empty venue in sheer confusion plastered on their faces]

Etzio: "The place is still open so this is weird.  I know we’re not the last band to play."
Vyukara: "Uh huh."
Condread: "This is abnormal, even for us, and that’s saying something!"
Vyukara: "What do you guys think it is?"
Etzio: "Not sure but we should probably check it out"
Condread: "Agreed." 

[Condread raises his his arm over his chest to salute to the others]

Condread: Long Live!
Etzio and Vyukara: Long Live the Union United!



[Etizo & Vyukara face Condread and salute back before running into the empty rows of the venue to try and find out what happened]

Condread: "I got nothing over here!"
Etzio: "Same!"
Vyukara: "You guys can't find anything either?!"

[The trio meet up back in front of the stage]

Condread: "It’s like everyone just vanished"
Vyukara: "How?"
Condread: "Not sure'
Etzio: "We should get back to the hotel room it'll be easier to talk there"
Vyukara: "Good idea'

[The trio walk out the back doors of the venue revealing the night sky high above colored a pale red with no starts to be found and the wind with an cold whistle. The three step into a Red Van and fasten their seat belts with Condread driving and Vyukara in Shotgun]

Condread: "We really need a better form of transportation"
Vyukara: "It could be worse.  My red car was a piece of junk"
Etzio: "I think dirt is a more accurate color than red."
Condread: "Nearly got me stuck at your place that one winter."
Etzio: "I thought you were supposed to be the forgetful one."
Condread: "We both know I kind of shed that nickname awhile ago.  At any rate, get in everyone!"

[As Condread the attempts to start the car the engine fails to start]

Condread: "Come on! Come on! This crap again, at a time like this'
Etzio: "Have you tried turning it off and on again?"
Condread: "I expect jokes like that from Vyukara but not you."
Vyukara: "Maybe the red car was better"
Condread: "Don’t push it-"


[Condread cut off by the engine finally starting finally drives them onto the road]

Etzio: "Anyone notice a severe lack of people as well"
Condread: "Should I try and go through another car?"
Vyukara: "Did we ever figure that out!?!!"
Condread:" Nope"
Etzio: "You littered in a pocket dimension."
Condread: "Ha ha very funny, but uh really where is everyone?"
Vyukara: "No idea"
Condread: "How far are we from the nearest Union outpost?"
Etzio: "Not sure Ill check on my phone, why?"
Condread: "We aren’t going back to the hotel"

[after driving for a good while a burnt down destroyed hotel comes into view with smoke still rising]

Etzio: "DUDE! MY DRAGUNITIES WERE IN THE ROOM!"
Condread: "Burned just like Dragon Ravine"
Etzio:"Yeah but that came back! I’d punch you if you weren't driving!"
Vyukara: "So to the outpost?"
Condread: "Yeah."
Etzio: "Why are you two so nonchalant about this our shit burned down?!"
Condread: "I keep my important stuff with me at all times"
Vyukara: "Condread said it’d be a good idea in case of an emergency"
Etzio: "and you didn't tell me!?"
Condread: "You were washing dishes with music so loud I didn't even come down to tell you."
Etzio: "didn’t it ever occur to you again!?"
Condread: "Nope"
Vyukra: "so Etzio. what is the nearest outpost?"
Etzio: "20 mins from here. but that was about 7 mins ago so."
Condread and Vyukara: "20?"
Etzio: "Yes 20 Min- god damn it"
Vyukara: "how many times is that in the last week now"
Condread: "I’d estimate 20"
Etzio: "That one was on purpose"
Condread: "Its still funny"
Vyukara: "You bet"
Condread: well since there's no one else around... 


[As Etzio and Vyukara are thrown against the back of their seats while Condread begins to floor it on the way to the Union outpost further ahead] 

Etzio: "Are you nuts!?"
Condread: "Haven’t we been over this?"
Vyukara: "I think so.  So what exactly are we gonna do?"
Etzio: "That’s a good point, why are we going to the outpost?"
Condread: "We’re going there because we’re in need of supplies at this point and something supernatural is going on, and it seems our old "friend" is back for a 3rd round"
Etzio: Good point.

[End Chapter]


To any readers, I could really use some advice on making this a bit better the story is pretty set out but this is my first ever attempt at writing fan fiction so advice on how to write it would be greatly appreciated as well as if you like the story or not. Thanks!

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looks more like a script than a story

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TL;DR so No.

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The text color makes it hard to read to be honest.

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You can edit it boy and maybe do it shorter

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