dark magician deck

hehe after deep looking for good cards, i made a dark magician deck
it took me 20 minutes ><"
anyway, look on the cards and tell me what are your suggestions to fix it

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/260209/55182_darkmagic.bmp

I think this deck is a too bad...

Why you add silent magicians???

-3 silent magicians

-1 Phoenix -1 Hand of Nepthyns

-1 Mystic Box

+2 Magician Valkyria

+2 Foolish Burial

+2 Dark Magic Curtain

you should add dark magician girl

- 3 Peten
- 2 Silent
- 2 e-hero(u don t need them in a dark magician deck)

Okay you need Dark Magic Curtain and DMG, Tribute To The Doomed ...These cards r the ones u need...Hmm Mage Power and Axe of Despair... You will need those 2...
Just what the hell are silent magicians doin there?Put out them and prizma..... You can put Mask of Darkness if you wanna...
And more fixes.... Yea 1 more.. add Lightning Vortex