Dark Magician Deck

So I was playing around, and decided to make a Dark Magician deck. End of story.
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If any card names unknown, just ask.

-1 dark magician

-2 solidarity

-1 terra

-3 Royal to side

-1 Breaker

-1 Kycoo
-1 Veiler
-Dark End Dragon




+3 safe zone
+2 MST
+2 Lance
+1 Chalice
+Lavalval
+wave-motion
+2 torrential



+skill drains in side too

The Captain wrote:

-1 dark magician

-2 solidarity

-1 terra

-3 Royal to side

-1 Breaker

-1 Kycoo
-1 Veiler
-Dark End Dragon




+3 safe zone
+2 MST
+2 Lance
+1 Chalice
+Lavalval
+wave-motion
+2 torrential



+skill drains in side too

Maybe I didn't make this clear, but it's supposed to be a Dark Magician control deck. Please state why you would remove or put any cards in/out. Also, make clear which cards are which - Wave-motion cannon or diffusion wave-motion? Why the TT? And why the skill drains? Thanks though.

- Chalice (No point in just running 1)
- Curtain (Not worth it)
- Gagaga (Useless here)
- 2 Kycoo (To side instead)
- 1 Terra

+ 3 Magician's Valkyrie (Since your going for a Controlish build here, it can be helpful)
+ 3 Wonder Wand (Need more draw power)

Also maybe - 1 DM and - 1 Skilled DM and - 1 BoM and + 2 TKR and + 1 BLS-EoTB

-1 Skilled Dark Magician (Running three isn't bad but can clog the deck)
-1 Effect Veiler (Don't need three for it's short lasting effect. Consider -2)
-Dark Magic Curtain (Better cards can get it out without paying 1/2 LP)
-Gagaga Magician (Seems a bit random)

+2 Magician's Valkyria (A very nice stall, tribute and low drop mage)
+1 Ancient Rules (In lieu of Dark Magic Curtain)

Personally I find monster destruction spells flow well with Dark Magician decks as opposed to draws and life gain. Try working with Fissure, Hammer Shot, etc. Also, your trap distribution is a bit low. A good combination with spellcasters is attack negating traps to stall for more time. Just a thought. Hope it can help.