Before I continue yugioh wars

Before I continue the fanfic I want to try to improve how I am writing the story so it may take some time before the next section. This is to improve the writing. 

Also, do you guys think I should continue with it the story or no? If you do not read it and comment then please say so.

Not sure if @Linda-Senpai is still around but she would be able to get you some great advice.