City Girl

C&C any tips and guidance are welcomed




V2:


Last edited by STX on Thu Feb 09, 2017 12:29 pm; edited 1 time in total

I like the little vine vectors you are using in the piece, they're could've been great light source for the piece. Add more light effects to the vines to make a effect where they actually seem like they're emitting light and glow. The random light sources in the top left and right is unnecessary and could've just came from the vines.

Good work in-all. Keep working at it.

Then maybe someday you'll beat me in SOTW

Kandy.JPEG wrote:

I like the little vine vectors you are using in the piece, they're could've been great light source for the piece. Add more light effects to the vines to make a effect where they actually seem like they're emitting light and glow. The random light sources in the top left and right is unnecessary and could've just came from the vines.

Good work in-all. Keep working at it.

Then maybe someday definitely one day you'll beat me in SOTW

Thanks! Later today i'll fix those lighting issues and post a revised version using your tips.

Fill in some empty places around the lower corners, but otherwise solid work and my fav from you thus far.

keep it up my dude

v2:

V1 feels better to me

CrimsonOverlord wrote:

V1 feels better to me

why is that? is it the lighting?

STX wrote:

CrimsonOverlord wrote:

V1 feels better to me

why is that? is it the lighting?

Yea unlike kandy i like the light sources in v1. Gives it a spotlight kinda feel

Hmm @Anzo your opinion?

Anzo's opinions are as useful as Aatrox in LoL

Kandy.JPEG wrote:

Anzo's opinions are as useful as Aatrox in LoL

I don't get it. Do another analogy.

STX wrote:

Kandy.JPEG wrote:

Anzo's opinions are as useful as Aatrox in LoL

I don't get it. Do another analogy.

Jesus to the buddhism religion

CrimsonOverlord wrote:

STX wrote:

Kandy.JPEG wrote:

Anzo's opinions are as useful as Aatrox in LoL

I don't get it. Do another analogy.

Jesus to the buddhism religion

... Little more help...

STX wrote:

CrimsonOverlord wrote:

STX wrote:

Kandy.JPEG wrote:

Anzo's opinions are as useful as Aatrox in LoL

I don't get it. Do another analogy.

Jesus to the buddhism religion

... Little more help...

DA Is to Yu-gi-oh

Trump to USA?

Anyhow, my input: The render has smooth feel to it yet your effects have hard edges, shiny, but hard. It could be smoother. Also the BG on the left just doesn't fit, it interferes with your pink-like light source while having a bit of orange to it. The left side is overdone, that is, it's more apparent than the other side of your tag, the blue effects. That little bit on her hair could be reduced, and same for her light reflection on her dress. I also can't catch the flow.

~Cheers

STX wrote:

CrimsonOverlord wrote:

STX wrote:

Kandy.JPEG wrote:

Anzo's opinions are as useful as Aatrox in LoL

I don't get it. Do another analogy.

Jesus to the buddhism religion

... Little more help...

About as useful as a comb to a bald man