You're slowly but surely getting back in form. However, there is a couple of things to note: The background takes somewhat more focus than your render, and also there is a blur on his elbow which i believe you forgot to erase. The other thing is the text; it's taking plenty of focus, you should either remove it or change its colours to something darker that wouldn't interfere with your render's focus. KIU!
No ReasonSat Aug 15, 2015 1:04 pm