Sora - spelling errors left and right, but more importantly I can't deal with you using a pic of Ulquiorra from Bleach and calling him by a different name. My favorite Bleach character must not be used so impertinently!!
Dangerous Expension Zone - k, 1st it is spelled Expansion. Next, this card breaks too many of the yugioh rules and would be too spammable in any swarming deck. There are decks out there that can swarm 8 monsters to the field easily in 1 turn. There isn't even a cost for using this awesome effect...
Contact Dimension - broken card. every turn summon a Neos token, then any Neo-Spacian and fuse. Just way uber broken.
Thunder Caster - card seems relatively underpowered.
Kurogane - seems slightly overpowered, meh maybe balanced. not sure on this one.
Kurenai - definitely seems overpowered. too useful in a Burn deck, especially Volcanic Burn.
Creativity: 8.5/10 (good and unique)
Spelling/Grammar/Syntax: 1/10 (awful, horrible spelling. is so bad it makes it difficult to read some of the cards)
Pics: 6/10 (damn u taking Ulquiorra, but also some of the pics are very commonly used by many people, so not as creative)
Balance: 6.5/10 (some cards are good, others need some more work)
My Opinion: 6/10
Final Rating: 5.6/10 (your spelling really hurt you, but do note that I consider 5/10 to be average so this is slightly above average. good job)
Dangerous Expension Zone - k, 1st it is spelled Expansion. Next, this card breaks too many of the yugioh rules and would be too spammable in any swarming deck. There are decks out there that can swarm 8 monsters to the field easily in 1 turn. There isn't even a cost for using this awesome effect...
Contact Dimension - broken card. every turn summon a Neos token, then any Neo-Spacian and fuse. Just way uber broken.
Thunder Caster - card seems relatively underpowered.
Kurogane - seems slightly overpowered, meh maybe balanced. not sure on this one.
Kurenai - definitely seems overpowered. too useful in a Burn deck, especially Volcanic Burn.
Creativity: 8.5/10 (good and unique)
Spelling/Grammar/Syntax: 1/10 (awful, horrible spelling. is so bad it makes it difficult to read some of the cards)
Pics: 6/10 (damn u taking Ulquiorra, but also some of the pics are very commonly used by many people, so not as creative)
Balance: 6.5/10 (some cards are good, others need some more work)
My Opinion: 6/10
Final Rating: 5.6/10 (your spelling really hurt you, but do note that I consider 5/10 to be average so this is slightly above average. good job)