Hmm, from the top of my head: 2 Mark of the Rose, no Rosewhips, 1 Maron. Compuls instead of Mirror. Looks pretty solid.
I did that and here's what I have now:
I really want at least one mirror force, and after I added all the cards I have 41 instead of 40 and that kinda throws me off my game. Any suggestions on what to remove?