My Zombie Deck

k this is my zombie deck and im hoping to get fixes

x2 Ryu Kokki
x2 Il Blud
x3 Zombie Master
D.D. Warrior Lady
Snipe Hunter
x3 Pyramid Turtle
x2 Goblin Zombie
Sangan
Spirit Reaper
Morphing Jar

x3 Book of Life
x2 Call of The Mummy
Card Of Safe Return
Smashing Ground
x2 hammer shot
Lightning Vortex
Mystical Space Typhoon
Heavy Storm
Nobleman of Crossout
Pot of Avarice

Torrential Tribute
Mirror Force
Waboku
x3 Dark Bribe
Bottomless Trap Hole
Fissure
Trap Hole

So ya i hope to get some fixes and rate my deck if u want

(total cards 40)

5.5/10

You need more monsters, like Vampir Lord.

-1Ryu Kooki
-Warrior Lady
+Vampire Lord
-Pot f Avarice (you have just 17 monsters in your deck!!)
-Safe return
-Waboku

3*Dark Bribe!!!!!!
mmm... you forgot Monster Reborn!!

i recoman you use 1 il blud not 2
-dd warrior lady
-3dark bribes
+3 solemn judgemen
-trap hole
-waboku
+3 shrink
+monter reborn
-pot of avarice

i think the fixes should be like this:
-3 Dark Bribe
- Wabouku
- RyuKooki
-2 Call of the muumy
- trap hole
- Pot of avarice
-2 Hammer Shot

+ Monster reborn
+ Card of safe return
+ 3 Solemn Judgement
+ Bottomoles trap hole
+ 2 Enemy controller
+ 2 Shrink
+ Breaker the magical warrior

I think these are the fixes needed :D

This deck needs a lot of fixes.

-1 Il Blud (you should never need more than 1)
-1 D.D. Warrior Lady (very random)
-2 Call of the Mummy (automatic -1)
-2 Hammer Shot (bad card except in some gadget decks, and decks like yubel)
-1 Pot of Avarice (Zombies WANT TO BE IN THE GRAVE, NOT THE DECK!!!)
-1 Waboku (random)
-3 Dark Bribe (oh, awesome +1 for your opponent)
-1 Trap Hole (no, maybe hell no. Why would you ever run this over BTH???)
-1 Fissure (this isn't a trap, but anyways you don't need it)
-1 Bottomless Trap Hole (taking this out because you need Solemns)

-14 / +14 = 40 cards

+1 Dark Armed Dragon
+3 Raiou
+1 Chaos Sorcerer

This gives you a better monster lineup. 9 more cards to add

+2 Creature Swap (swap out your Pyramid Turtles and Goblin Zombies. Too good not to use in this deck)
+2 Shrink (works well again with Pyramid Turtle and Goblin Zombie, but can work with any of your monsters of course)
+1 Card Destruction (get those Zombies in the grave)
+1 Monster Reborn (HOW can you forget this card??)
+3 Solemn Judgment (PUT THIS IN 95% OF ALL YOUR DECKS!!!!)

The monster line ups is as good as that:

Ryu Kokki
Il Blud
3x Zombie Master
Snipe Hunter
3x Pyramid Turtle
2x Goblin Zombie
Sangan
Spirit Reaper
Morphing Jar
DAD
Breaker
Raiou x3
Chaos sorcerer

Total:20
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Spells: 13

3x Book of Life
Card Of Safe Return
Smashing Ground
Lightning Vortex
Mystical Space Typhoon
Heavy Storm
Brain Control
Nonster Reborn
2x Creature Swap
Card Destruction
2x Enemy Controler
____________
Traps:5

Mirror Force
Torrential Tribute
3x Solemn Judgment


This would be a nice Zombie Deck ^^

EDIT: Damn u Neko !!! u posted while i writing T_T ...jk ^_^
Still the deck i suggest u is the above one ..

is this deck for KCVDS?
(if not you wont put synchros nor tuners ???!)
- 1 creature swap
- chaos
- breaker

+ 2 foolish burial (you need zombies in grave for easier swarming)
+ CCV or DDV (to keep your zombies in control)

thanks for fixing my deck
its the first one i made so i know i left good cards out