Blackwing deck help

i need assistance on a good blackwing deck heres wats in the deck feel free to make changes to the deck and these are all black wings:

Monsters
2 mistral the silver shield
1 shura the blue flame
2 sirocco the dawn
1 kalut the moon shadow
2 gust the backblast
2 ghibli the searing wind
2 fane the steal chain
3 etesian the two swords
1 elphin the raven
3 camila the haze
2 brisote the tailwind
2 boreas the sharp
1 breeze the zephyr
2 blizzard the far north
1 gale the whirlwind
1 silverwind the ascendant
1 blackwing armed wing
1 blackwing armor master
1 black-winged dragon

spells
1 black-winged strafe
1 card of black feathers
2 against the wind
3 raptor wing strike
1 swords of revealing light
2 twisters

traps
1 black feather beacon
1 delta crow-anti reverse
3 black thunder
2 blackback
2 blackboost
2 blackwing-backlash
2 blackwing-bombarment
1 blackwing-boobytrap

Im not the best deck maker but i would take out swords of revealing light and some of the blackwing themed traps for staples like solemn, dark hole, and add in a card i think its called icarus attack its pretty good. :D

ok...so im going to tell you a basic technique of YuGiOh... Try to keep as many of the important cards as you can in your deck... and as few useless cards as possible in your deck. If you can think of 9-10 spots where it would help(against a meta deck) keep 3 (unless it is limited, semi, or banned). If 7-8 keep 2. If 6, keep 1. if less...it is trash. Also keep cards which are vital to the way that the deck runs.

here i would keep Bora at 3, Shura at 3, Gale at 1, vayu at 2, sirroco at 2, and maybe a Dark Grepher. After that i would put in 2 blizzards because a free synchro is never bad and the rest is just preference.

Traps... just because its a blackwing deck doesn't mean all Blackwing traps...
Add in staples like the three solemns, mirror force, bottomless trap hole, dimensional prison, and torrential tribute. (i recommend Icarus Attack),

spells...same thing as traps...
where are monster reborn, Dark Hole, mystical space typhoon, Allure of the Darkness, and Heavy Storm? (keep Black Whirlwind though)

ah i see teach, so i didnt do a good job using that method for my blackwing deck

so know ideas on how to make the blackwings much better

Mind posting a new screen of it. I'll help with it . Bookmarked the page in case I forgot too lol.

I think you have too much random cards
A lot of blackwing players that I know (even me :D) don't use so much monsters. They use blizzard, bora, gale, kalut, shura and vayu (2-3 more don't know them now :D). Add some more synchros and xyz monsters. And you have too much bl traps, add solemn, mirror force and get rid some of yours.

The Blackwings should be Bora, Shura, and Blizzard at 3, kalut at 2, gale, sirocco, zephyros and vayu at 1. This is absolutely mandatory for any BW deck. Take all the other BWs out. I speak from a year of experience playing the archetype.

^ This.

Also: 3 Icarus Attack, Allure of Darkness, Dark Hole, Heavy Storm, Monster Reborn, 2x MST, 2x Bottomless Trap Hole, 2x Torrential Tribute, Dark Armed Dragon, Black Whirlwind.

You could try using Swallow's Nest. Anyway, what build are you using?
You can use Dark Eruption instead of using Against the Wind. Dark Eruption can help you take your Kaluts and Gale from the graveyard without paying any life points

well Frances Kaizer, the recipe that shows on my very first post is my blackwing deck

take our swards of light

so taking out swords will help out with my blackwings

Swords sucks in Blackwing decks, in fact, its not too good in most decks. I also don't know why your deck is completely composed of only blackwing cards, Blackwings don't have any good archetype related trap cards, and only 1 good spell card.

Here is a Blackwing skeleton for you:

Monsters: 17

3 Bora the Spear

3 Shura the Blue Flame

3 Blizzard the Far North

2 Kalut the Moon Shadow

1 Gale the Whirlwind

1 Sirocco the Dawn

1 Zephyros the Elite

1 Vayu the Emblem of Honor

1 Dark Armed Dragon

1 Gorz the Emissary of Darkness

Spells: 12

1 Black Whirlwind

1 Allure of Darkness

1 Dark Hole

1 Heavy Storm

1 Book of Moon

1 Monster Reborn

1 Mind Control

3 Mystical Space Typhoon

2 Forbidden Lance

Traps: 11

1 Solemn Judgment

2 Solemn Warning

2 Torrential Tribute

2 Bottomless Trap Hole

2 Compulsory Evacuation Device

2 Icarus Attack

alright lord of blue eyes ill give that a shot

Nice enough. That looks like my deck now. But that will still need some fixes, maybe adding the 3rd icarus attack is a good idea and dark eruption! dont forget, dark eruption can give you back your kaluts :D

ill make sure then i can remake the deck in real life

well the deck is working well now to get the cards to make it in real life