Unkown's Cards

Here are my first cards:












This can can only be Ritual Summoned by the Ritual Card "Rising of the Untouchable".
This card gains 100 ATK for each "Ninja" monster you have in your graveyard. This card inflicts Piercing damage. If there is another "Ninja" type monster on the field, this card is unaffected by the effects of Spells,Traps,and Monster Effects. If this card would be destroyed, you can remove from play 1 "Ninja" type monster from your graveyard to negate the effect that targeted it, and destroy that card.

P.S. : Piercing Damage= In a a battle with a DEF position type monster who's DEF is lower..................... inflict the difference bla bla.

I don't like the name of the first monster.
I don't like too how is writen the effect of the second monster.
The ritual monster is OOOOOOVERPOWERED.
Nice pic for the ritual spell

6/10

It is not proper to say Piercing Damage on a Yugioh card. We all know what it means, but that term is not used on any real card text.

The Ritual Monster is brokenly overpowered. Basically, for the cost of 1 8 star monster you can plant a mega monster on the field who cannot be destroyed except by battle, but his ATK is high enough to make that unlikely and additionally if it were to be destroyed by battle you just remove a card from the grave to keep it alive. O_O To top it all off you also give it piercing damage! Way, way, way too broken. The only card in the game that is unaffected by spells, traps, and monster effects is Vennominaga and she is only balanced because she is nearly impossible to summon! What you created is an easily summoned immortal card that auto-wins the duel when summoned. Broken, broken broken.

Pics for the vanilla monster and Ritual Spell could be better.

Creativity: 7/10
Spelling/Grammar/Syntax: 5/10
Pics: 5/10
Balance: 1/10
My Thoughts: 3/10

Final Rating: 4.2/10

one card is overpowered first pic is 5/10
the total is 6/10

Good cards 5/10 too Overpowered !

xD I know its overpowered... I made that on purpose, so it is all crazy and stuff.
And, hey Neko what's wrong with my Grammar and Spelling? I don't recall I did any mistakes, did I? And yes, a few card DO have Piercing written on them, according to Wikia.
The only real card that has "Piercing" written on it is Cyberdark Horn.

I dont really like the pictures of the cards, but the cards are not bad.

Rating: 7/10

as TOxicLubllaby said the pictures are not the best that you can find .. also i don't think it's realyt overpowerd so my rating is 7/10
try to choose a better pictures next time bro