Trying something more Anzo style xD

excuse me while i go throw up



jk, nice try. you'll get there.

you are actually getting better the right side is pretty good, the only thing i dislike is that like deformation on the left side looks to forced

STX wrote:

excuse me while i go throw up



jk, nice try. you'll get there.

Lol, wouldn't be mad if you trew up lol  I know, I just got inspired to do something diffrent  

Drunkion wrote:

you are actually getting better the right side is pretty good, the only thing i dislike is that like deformation on the left side looks to forced

Yeah the right side turned better then expected since I didn't really touch much on it and maybe I focused too much on the left side and that is why it looks forced. 

Thanks to both of you tho

well, next try to work on flow and light source and depth and focus point. especially focal point, all these colors are taking away the render chet and bc of all these sharp colors, it shows that the right bottom part is empty quite painfully. Light and depth are minor as of now, consider focal point and flow first. I really can not say much on flow since it differs from each render and u catch it by ur heart

Will try and work on it thanks ^^

No matter the kind of resources you use, without proper focal point and light source you won't get anywhere. It's an improvement, but you still use the same methods. Always have your render be the focal point and everything around it redirects the light towards its essential features (i.e, gun, eyes, hair, hand, power, etc.) each render has its own unique features.

KIU

Thing is I don't really know how to do the focal point lol...

I am trying tho  

Thanks ^^

The focal point is basically where you want the person to look first when looking at your tag. Normally it's the face of your render, or any unique feature your render might have. Making of focal points have many sub-methods; however, the standard method is you basically sharpen the area of where you want the focal point to be and blur/darken the surrounding areas. All of your light sources, effects, C4Ds must follow the natural flow of your focal point.

Take my current signature for example, the first thing you notice when you look at it - let me guess -, it's the eye, isn't it. That's a focal point.

I see...will work on it I guess ^^

It's decent, can't give you much credit since you used straight from a PSD

Hope to see your own work soon

chet, first thing I put my eyes on is the squares in BG on Anzo's sig ._.

and yeah focal oint applies to drawing too so its really wut stands out the most

yes ik I repeated myself 4 times alrdy but heh

I saw Anzo's font first tbh :c

thats the second thing lol

I saw squares first bc my first thought was "WTF did the opacity or fill went 60% by accident?" but I realized dis is not inside PS chet

Kandy.JPEG wrote:

It's decent, can't give you much credit since you used straight from a PSD

Hope to see your own work soon

I didn't use Anzo's PSD nor did I copy anything. I used on  of his works as an inspiration. It helped get an idea what I wanted to do.

And yeah I understand focal point I just need to practise it.