Relinquished Deck

I made a relinquished deck and i would be glad to if you could give me your opinions or advice.

Screenshot of my deck:
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List of cards in deck:
3 * relinquished
2 * dark illusion
3 * black illusion ritual
3 * ritual blaster
2 * ritual cage
2 * fulfillment of the contract
1 * preparation of rites
2 * ritual weapon
1 * djinn cursenchanter of rituals
2 * djinn disserere of rituals
2 * djinn presider of rituals
3 * djinn releaser of rituals
3 * manju of the ten thousand hands
3 * gravity bind
1 * monster reborn
2 * mirror force
2 * opti-camouflage armor
1 * gorz the emissary of darkness
3 * mystical space typhoon

Screenshots of how the two last games i played ended:





Sooo i any tips/opinions?

The following are all the changes made since you won't really be able to use certain cards come September:
-2 Cursenchanters (You're almost never going to encounter Synchro Monsters, even if more show up.)
-1 Ritual Buster (It's a bit situational and easily becomes a dead draw)
-3 Gravity Bind (These are almost completely worthless since all decks have at least 5 Xyz Monsters, which aren't affected by level-related cards)
-Monster Reborn (It's banned again come September)
+Foolish Burial (It puts your level 1 Djinn into the graveyard for a faster set-up)
+2 Tragoedia (Gorz isn't enough to stop all the incoming attacks)
+2 Battle Fader (If you want to last long, you must have something that can stop the battle phase altogether. It can also then be tributed for your Relinquished summon)

The only Djinn worth using is the one that stops special summons

Hoshi(no)Tama777 wrote:

The following are all the changes made since you won't really be able to use certain cards come September:
-2 Cursenchanters (You're almost never going to encounter Synchro Monsters, even if more show up.)
-1 Ritual Buster (It's a bit situational and easily becomes a dead draw)
-3 Gravity Bind (These are almost completely worthless since all decks have at least 5 Xyz Monsters, which aren't affected by level-related cards)
-Monster Reborn (It's banned again come September)
+Foolish Burial (It puts your level 1 Djinn into the graveyard for a faster set-up)
+2 Tragoedia (Gorz isn't enough to stop all the incoming attacks)
+2 Battle Fader (If you want to last long, you must have something that can stop the battle phase altogether. It can also then be tributed for your Relinquished summon)

yeah you might be right, will make the suggested changes. Thank you

pure_wiN wrote:

The only Djinn worth using is the one that stops special summons

I will have to disagree ... The one that has been most helpful to me (till now at least ) is djinn disserere of rituals which makes your monster immune to traps.

Please do not double post.

Thank you.

Naito Raizu wrote:

Please do not double post.

Thank you.

Oh sorry, didnt mean to, I wasnt even aware i double posted O.O ...

That's fine. Just try not to do it again.

Add Tsukuyomi to control the monsters on opp Side with Relinquished ;d Like Have Relinquised with Equipped monster. Summon Tsuku Flip Relin FD destroy's Equip. Flip Summon Relin equip new monster ;d

PsychoSanji wrote:

Add Tsukuyomi to control the monsters on opp Side with Relinquished ;d Like Have Relinquised with Equipped monster. Summon Tsuku Flip Relin FD destroy's Equip. Flip Summon Relin equip new monster ;d

Nice thought