Listen. What you did there is blend the focal out from the bg with those glowing lines. Remember that light is dynamic, it will land on everything and it's the easiest way to mix it all together.
See the second version? There's a little bit of light around it, you can do that either by creating a clipping mask layer on the render (on color dodge) and with a soft white (light orange for sunsets etc.) brush go around it or just add a layer on soft light and fix the lightning. There are a lot of ways..
P.S : Never place the text on the focal.