Flame Swordswoman

I'll bet some of you were thinking "OMG!! DOUBLE POST!" when you saw the subject. But that is because this is the source of the card art that I used for my previous post with the same subject.



I used the same background stock that I used in one of my beginner works. However as you can see I have come a long way since then:



I think I might try to salvage this one... maybe better text, blending, and a different c4d?

EDIT: Well I tried my best

Fonts on the red BRD sig is meh. Flame Swordswoman is really nice, I like it a lot. Last BRD sig's color is a bit weird, but it's ok.

The first BRD as I mentioned is one of my much older works from over a year and a half ago.

You think red would be better for the 2nd BRD sig?



how does this look then?