Burn like Hell

I ain't Atticus, but i have to try just becuz.



It's my first time doing such a thing, so any advices are welcome.

Atticus used a brush to create the eagle, not a render. Generally, it's good, but it needs a little bit more care.

Atticus is whole new level, so u know...
Tell me the things that have to be a changed, so i work on it.

Okay, here is the bombshell.

The text isn't supposed to be 100% readable, noticed, or anything. It can be a little bit more blinded, half a letter disappearing in the red lights, it doesn't matter, people will still be able to read it. The font you used is nice, but i'd recommend something thinner, this one is a little bit thick and doesn't serve the purpose of the tag. Your focal, which is in this case the creature in the middle, shouldn't contain something other than Red, or something close to it, like soft red, or dark violet. White, isn't something suitable, instead of looking at the red, the first thing you notice when you look at the tag is the white color instead of the other red stuff.

For the Lethal Edge part, using something thin (as i said above), and for the Burn like hell part, capitalize all first letters of every word and resize it to make it smaller than the main text, which is in this case Lethal Edge.

If i'm not mistaken, you used two different brushes, the circle, and the star. Of course adding addition brushes can be a good thing, but in this case you need to make it simple, since you want people to notice it's a tag after all, not a signature, so you don't really need to make it complicated or full of effects, one or two effects should be enough.

Also use a normal soft red brush, with low density, and brush over a little bit, once or twice maximum, one click on the left side, and one click on the right side.

Not sure, i feel i forgot something, but don't know what it is u_u

Kay thx ;d

Anzo ò_ó wrote:

The text isn't supposed to be 100% readable, noticed, or anything. It can be a little bit more blinded, half a letter disappearing in the red lights, it doesn't matter, people will still be able to read it.

Yep, i'm using this thing here.Maybe i should try to hide it even a bit more.

Anzo ò_ó wrote:

The font you used is nice, but i'd recommend something thinner, this one is a little bit thick and doesn't serve the purpose of the tag.

Wasn't completely sure about it.Prolly will go for thinner one after this advice.

Anzo ò_ó wrote:

Your focal, which is in this case the creature in the middle, shouldn't contain something other than Red, or something close to it, like soft red, or dark violet. White, isn't something suitable, instead of looking at the red, the first thing you notice when you look at the tag is the white color instead of the other red stuff.

It's actually just a c4d ;d Somehow it really looks like creature.The wings and everything is from different c4ds.Tho i make it red in the begining but it comes too much red and i didn't like the result, so i decide to try something a bit different.I see what you mean, but this is kinda for what i was looking for.

Anzo ò_ó wrote:

If i'm not mistaken, you used two different brushes, the circle, and the star. Of course adding addition brushes can be a good thing, but in this case you need to make it simple, since you want people to notice it's a tag after all, not a signature, so you don't really need to make it complicated or full of effects, one or two effects should be enough.

good point.Will try to decrease the number of the effects.

Anzo ò_ó wrote:

Also use a normal soft red brush, with low density, and brush over a little bit, once or twice maximum, one click on the left side, and one click on the right side.

Sure.

C4D? I thought it was Debris Dragon xD

Anzo ò_ó wrote:

C4D? I thought it was Debris Dragon xD

THIS!

And the fuCCK is with that tiger avatar anzo haha.

Amy Cool wrote:

Anzo ò_ó wrote:

C4D? I thought it was Debris Dragon xD

THIS!

And the fuCCK is with that tiger avatar anzo haha.

hes trying to be like neko .-.

I never knew kittens could GFX...

Amy bring ma sig back ;d

tho i'll upload the one after all changes later.