mm...needs some balancing and needs a lot of work on proper Yugioh Syntax for the wording. There is no such thing as LP on a card. It is always Life Points. For the last card, it should be when the card is flip summoned only, not just when it is flipped face up. Amazon Wizard seems very underpowered. Stats 0/0 and requires another card's help to be invulnerable in battle . . . for a 6 star monster? Nobody would ever use her. Far too weak. At least give her some decent stats. The spell card also seems weak considering you only made 1 card that it does any good for and it doesn't have any actual effect itself.
Creativity: 8.5/10
Spelling/Grammar/Syntax: 2/10
Balance: 3/10
Pics: 7/10
My Opinion: 5/10
Final Rating: 5.1/10