~Forced lighting. bad text. very plain, seems like a stock. better blending needed.
~Nice depth.
its not a bad text .. i tryed to choose another text but this one looks much better than the other options .. and its not plain just for your informations ... also i don't use stocks. i hate them, thanks for comments any way. cant wait to see your works ....
Adding C4Ds or brush on this kind of signatures will ruin it mostly, use filters and adjustments effects will be enough. Text some times is what making the signature looks good. not adding text is usually used in signatures that have a mass amoun of C4Ds/effects.