wonder if this called "art"!

didn't show any thing in the past few days .. so this is latest. was trying new style
actually, i made it while i was chating with a friend on hamachi, so i really didnt care that much for details >_> thats why it looks shiny and bad erasing for few parts.

Looks decent.
Me likes it.

As you already said, it's shiny.
Effects are too messy, I'm not getting what's happening there u.u
Can't call it a bad overall tough, so it0s a 6.5/10 In my oppinion.

well, actually i dont care in this ?/1o things .. i just post my arts for advices. any way thanks for comments guys

needs better shading for the lightning and more blendin color schemes..other than that it's ok

thanks for comments ppl , this should help next time