somthing for BLEACH

not sure this one is nice, but i lost almost all of my C4Ds 2 days ago .. so i really dont have much options atm

I think you could remove those stuff(left side), but the other is good, keep up the good work.

you mean the text?

Eleventh squad leader?? He's the captain of the 6th squad.

Too much text imo.

text is too distracting and remove the c4d on the right

Ken-chan is the 11th squad leader, yeah..
Mm too much text as bakura said.
I've seen better from you.

-_- ... Meh ... well i can't do better without C4Ds ^.^" .. thanks for comments .. ( and tnx for the info about he is the 6th squad captain, guess i should watch BLEACH more -_-)