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V2

V1

Hm, have you tried making the background white and adding some soft cyan color gradient to it? Cause the BG is attracting too much focus against your render.

like this?

Yep, maybe fill it with some brush strokes of some kind.

I like v1 the best
Good work

V2 but I don't like the render. Good work though.

Anzo wrote:

Yep, maybe fill it with some brush strokes of some kind.

how about this 

Kandy.JPEG wrote:

I like v1 the best
Good work

thanks!  its my favorite

Lux wrote:

V2 but I don't like the render. Good work though.

the render is dead sexy

Mhm, it looks decent. KIU

On both ones the blue lines on the bottom right are hitting on the background. Also I kinda don't think that the background is the perfect fit for the render C4D you used. 

Also I think you have made too big of a light source on top and it kinda becomes annoying for the eyes. Great work tho. 

Edit: You latest one has a more suitable background IMO.

what do you mean its hitting?

I didn't use the best word

I mean they look out of place IMO. And since there arent more of them around the whole peace it's just sloppy