Trying Again

Well, I'm back at it again with these bad sigs. Like always C&C welcomed.
V1:


V2:

I prefer V2 because the render doesn't fit too well with the orange part of the V1. But both look good

p.s. this is a critic from a person who can't open photoshop  

V1 is better imo. You have to work a with lighting effects. Light source is too strong but render doesn't get any of that light of the face. I like how you did the back light though. Keep it up!!

I like V2 way better. Keep it up!

The classic shatter C4D

v2 is better

I've tried working on the light on the front of the render, but I can't really tell if it worked out. What do y'all think?
V1 (Edited)


V2 (Edited)

Can hardly tell a difference tbh

I suggest you erase some of c4d covering up the render takes away from the focal point