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Yeah it is an improvement.

I don't think that the render is very well blended tho.

Also flow is a bit off. That is the things you should work on imo. 

It's good tho

Don't listen to Pep, Dazo.
It looks amazing!

Lol I just pointed out some thing that he could work on just from a watchers eye...no need to be rude lol

I have more respect for Peter then I do for you SK.

Tho Peter I don't think you completely see the flow, because it does exist. And the reason why I used vectors instead of C4Ds is because the render has a lot more colors (the planets are apart of the render). Tho mostly black and red stands out so red c4ds could have worked.

Yeah I see what you're saying. Tho mostly what I meant is the transition between the background and the vectors.

The shadows are killing it imho, also the little moon doesn't fit with the rest of your effects.

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The shadows are killing it imho, also the little moon doesn't fit with the rest of your effects.

True about the moon and the fact the shadows could be a lot less. The moon is part of the render that my friend rendered (you can find that here) and I could have easily cut that out. I might do that later actually.

Stock is oversharpened and vectors are kind of talk for themselves. 
Composition could be better imo

What do you mean by the vectors talk for themselves.

They seem to be a bit off. There's a big difference in quality between background and stock you used.

Ya think they were blured a bit too much?

I think it's because of the girl. If she was more like vectors (less sharpened) then it would be nicer

I think you used the dodge and burn too a bit too much. personally, I don't use it, unless it's on a photograph. I find the soft brushe works better. Less sharp for sure, but also I'd play around with the contrast and color intensity levels. maybe make a light source out of all those shaped vectors? like the stars and shit.

looks too sharp IMO and the colors of the vectors and the render dont match.