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Godly Signature Showcase №5

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Kandy.JPEG
Booked
Pepchoninga
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descriptionGodly Signature Showcase №5 EmptyGodly Signature Showcase №5Thu Sep 22, 2016 1:00 pm

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I have another one of these, since I have a 4 day break from school and have time to actually practise some shitz. 


I mostly think the first 2 are a step backwards from the last ones, but I'm really trying to improve in my usage of C4D and effects. Tho I will say I think that the 3rd one is probably my best attempt so far imo. 


Feedback and constructive criticism is very appreciated.


1.Godly Signature Showcase №5 Signat30


2.Godly Signature Showcase №5 Signat31


3.Godly Signature Showcase №5 Signat32

descriptionGodly Signature Showcase №5 EmptyRe: Godly Signature Showcase №5Thu Sep 22, 2016 2:42 pm

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well...they somewhat blend in, but again try making shets have more a feeling of depth and layered.

about the colors, idk, nothing I can say this time

just the first one, perhaps the bottom right or middle right, you can add another piece of something big there, since idk, but the twisted row thingy are standing out too much from the back purple color....

descriptionGodly Signature Showcase №5 EmptyRe: Godly Signature Showcase №5Thu Sep 22, 2016 2:44 pm

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Yeah well I'm working on blending as well ^^


Thanks for the suggestions Smile 

descriptionGodly Signature Showcase №5 EmptyRe: Godly Signature Showcase №5Thu Sep 22, 2016 2:46 pm

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watch my tail got bite again, maybe

next step u can try to start defining light sources, like I see how your renders stands out more than they shud be by times.

descriptionGodly Signature Showcase №5 EmptyRe: Godly Signature Showcase №5Thu Sep 22, 2016 2:51 pm

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@Bookingly, I'm gonna protect you, cuz I luv you <3


Yeah I sometimes find it hard getting the balance on the renders light compared to the other things on the signatures. Also most of my signatures don't have that many actual layers to help with the overall complexity of the GFX. I'm trying to watch/read more tutorials to improve in that department as well. 

descriptionGodly Signature Showcase №5 EmptyRe: Godly Signature Showcase №5Thu Sep 22, 2016 3:04 pm

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Still 4/10

descriptionGodly Signature Showcase №5 EmptyRe: Godly Signature Showcase №5Thu Sep 22, 2016 3:07 pm

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at least it didn't go down

and rly, it's more about experience, if you only watch ppl's tutorials n u dont try it much, u still step on ur footprints, just saying, gl hf though, AND GODDAM DUEL for the tournament alrdy ._.

descriptionGodly Signature Showcase №5 EmptyRe: Godly Signature Showcase №5Thu Sep 22, 2016 9:56 pm

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The 3rd one is surely better then a 4 Kandeh! 


I dooled, stfu now.


Comments bitches, I wunt comments! 

descriptionGodly Signature Showcase №5 EmptyRe: Godly Signature Showcase №5Thu Sep 22, 2016 10:04 pm

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Credit to @NightBot for sexy renders and cuz Ban botto. 


Also double post op.


#JustForSpam

descriptionGodly Signature Showcase №5 EmptyRe: Godly Signature Showcase №5Thu Sep 22, 2016 10:10 pm

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ban pep for double posting?

descriptionGodly Signature Showcase №5 EmptyRe: Godly Signature Showcase №5Thu Sep 22, 2016 10:12 pm

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How about Ban botto, for giving me a reason to double post? 

descriptionGodly Signature Showcase №5 EmptyRe: Godly Signature Showcase №5Thu Sep 22, 2016 10:17 pm

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yeah, I will ban both of u so no worries

descriptionGodly Signature Showcase №5 EmptyRe: Godly Signature Showcase №5Thu Sep 22, 2016 10:48 pm

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Upload a psd for me please.

Also here

Have my last PSD. You might be able to pick up some stuff from it.
Red is for elf siggy so ignore it unless it's selected

http://sta.sh/0qh9oajoqfs

descriptionGodly Signature Showcase №5 EmptyRe: Godly Signature Showcase №5Thu Sep 22, 2016 11:59 pm

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Will upload one tomorrow @Neji ^^


Thanks for the file, I will most definitely explore your techniques ^^ 


@Bookingly, just ban niney and Crimson and we are gonna be k. 

descriptionGodly Signature Showcase №5 EmptyRe: Godly Signature Showcase №5Sat Sep 24, 2016 8:31 am

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First and third are nice, on the second one backround doesn't fit with the render. 

descriptionGodly Signature Showcase №5 EmptyRe: Godly Signature Showcase №5Sat Sep 24, 2016 8:55 am

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First seems too noobish


Second is a mess


3rd is bae Razz 


Get gud Lux, cuz why not Godly Signature Showcase №5 3974120512 

descriptionGodly Signature Showcase №5 EmptyRe: Godly Signature Showcase №5Sat Sep 24, 2016 8:58 am

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Didn't want to go too hard on critizing Godly Signature Showcase №5 3974120512 

descriptionGodly Signature Showcase №5 EmptyRe: Godly Signature Showcase №5Sat Sep 24, 2016 9:00 am

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I feel broken...

descriptionGodly Signature Showcase №5 EmptyRe: Godly Signature Showcase №5Sat Sep 24, 2016 12:21 pm

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I think you should study a bit more, none of the renders blend. You try to combine bg with render, but you never blend the render with c4d, you dont follow flow etc. I suggest learning some basics, get good resources and study tutorials. It's the only way you will ever improve.

descriptionGodly Signature Showcase №5 EmptyRe: Godly Signature Showcase №5Sat Sep 24, 2016 12:33 pm

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Thubjs.

descriptionGodly Signature Showcase №5 EmptyRe: Godly Signature Showcase №5Sat Sep 24, 2016 12:52 pm

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Neji wrote:
Upload a psd for me please.

Also here

Have my last PSD. You might be able to pick up some stuff from it.
Red is for elf siggy so ignore it unless it's selected

http://sta.sh/0qh9oajoqfs


mvp

descriptionGodly Signature Showcase №5 EmptyRe: Godly Signature Showcase №5Sat Sep 24, 2016 1:33 pm

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Pepchoninga wrote:
Thubjs.

That means?

descriptionGodly Signature Showcase №5 EmptyRe: Godly Signature Showcase №5Sat Sep 24, 2016 2:06 pm

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CrimsonOverlord wrote:
Pepchoninga wrote:
Thubjs.

That means?


Many things

descriptionGodly Signature Showcase №5 EmptyRe: Godly Signature Showcase №5Sat Sep 24, 2016 3:22 pm

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CrimsonOverlord wrote:
Pepchoninga wrote:
Thubjs.

That means?

That means.....you r gei!

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