Heaven Academy: a DA Novel.

Hai guys, tl;dr: I'm writing a novel inspired by Duel Academy, with the MC based off myself. Currently there's two chapters, in process of writing the third.

You can read it at the link below

https://www.wattpad.com/187461117-heaven-academy-prologue

If you cant for whatever reason, here's another link to each chapter
http://sta.sh/01k9fhhzn96j
http://sta.sh/0t0f13doe1g
http://sta.sh/0be92zdwlrt
http://sta.sh/01kmk2nmq45i
http://sta.sh/01nz6zkem8qr

Please let me know what you think :D if you really like it, follow and comment on Wattpad as your way to contribute, tyvm

Last edited by Linda-Senpai on Sat Dec 26, 2015 2:56 am; edited 1 time in total

Interesting, keep going with this.

ty Botto and Anzo :D I will try to have chapter 3 done by the end of the week.

Alright.

I'm into writing and but I lack the style. Reading through this might actually be of a good help for me. So do your best

Who am i? .........The guy who kills the MC?

Finally got to make some time in the day to have a read of this. The setting and general atmosphere is nicely described and the introduction of the cast so far has been amusing (in a good way) I'm interested to see how things go from here! ^^

I hope I'm in this

ty@DDs :D

@Death and @FlapJack: You guys werent around back in the day <.< so if you are to be in it, it's gonna probably have to be in like book 2 or book 3 (this is gonna be a series)

If you guys would like characters in this, though, you can send me information on your characters appearance and personality and I will see what I can do with it. I cant make any promises on if Id be able to include your chars or not or when, but who knows? You might see yourself sooner than expected.

Take this from somebody who has written an unpublished novel. Not from the guy who simply doesnt like you. What youve wrotten, and considering your age, youre an excellent writer. The way you deacribed the gate was elegant, and the academy uniform also. Keep writing, plan the plot and finish. The biggest obstacle writers have to overcome are the lies we tell ourselves. Who are you writing this for? Keep it off the internet until it can be published. If you want some guidence on how to do so msg me.

Edit: even if you were an adult youde still be a good writer. Just saying this is like genius level shit from a 13 year old boy. 

I've been at this academy for three years almost ._.

Who the hell keeps hacking Dex? Or is it Dex himself lol; an eclipse it is

This was actually pretty entertaining

though i only know some characters that you picked out from here >.<

Keep it up

Readin' is fuun, good job N :D

Give her some kind of award @Anzo for this

Dex wrote:

Take this from somebody who has written an unpublished novel. Not from the guy who simply doesnt like you. What youve wrotten, and considering your age, youre an excellent writer. The way you deacribed the gate was elegant, and the academy uniform also. Keep writing, plan the plot and finish. The biggest obstacle writers have to overcome are the lies we tell ourselves. Who are you writing this for? Keep it off the internet until it can be published. If you want some guidence on how to do so msg me.

Edit: even if you were an adult youde still be a good writer. Just saying this is like genius level shit from a 13 year old boy. 

Thank you :D

Also guys, unfortunately I'm finding myself far too busy with work to finish ch3 at all >.< having to stay an extra hour for both my shifts...

Edit: and im not a 13 year old boy im a 17 year old girl .-.

Sounds pretty good. I'm sure the punctuation is average which is good for you. But, I was just scrolling through and saw this post so I didn't read all of it. Has a good story line and everything. But what inspired you to write this and if so how do you expect to show it to more people? If you need anymore feedback let me know.

Heartbreaker wrote:

Sounds pretty good. I'm sure the punctuation is average which is good for you. But, I was just scrolling through and saw this post so I didn't read all of it. Has a good story line and everything. But what inspired you to write this and if so how do you expect to show it to more people? If you need anymore feedback let me know.

I got inspired to right by me and Spade joking around on skype actually lol.

Linda-Senpai wrote:

Also guys, unfortunately I'm finding myself far too busy with work to finish ch3 at all >.< having to stay an extra hour for both my shifts...

Take your time. Everyone knows stories are better when made with more time spent on them, not less so it comes out faster.

Linda-Senpai wrote:

Heartbreaker wrote:

Sounds pretty good. I'm sure the punctuation is average which is good for you. But, I was just scrolling through and saw this post so I didn't read all of it. Has a good story line and everything. But what inspired you to write this and if so how do you expect to show it to more people? If you need anymore feedback let me know.

I got inspired to right by me and Spade joking around on skype actually lol.

Sounds cool.

I joined a year after you did so maybe that can be a thing. Other then that I don't particularly want to describe how I look and act unless I'm guaranteed a spot in the book. Other then that I hope you can find time to do what you enjoy.

BlackJack wrote:

I joined a year after you did so maybe that can be a thing. Other then that I don't particularly want to describe how I look and act unless I'm guaranteed a spot in the book. Other then that I hope you can find time to do what you enjoy.

You don't have to describe yourself IRL, just how you would want your character to be.

Welp ch3 and ch4 are wrote but they are unedited, so read with caution. Content is subject to change when edited but I'll inform you guys with the edited versions once they are done.

Also, important: I made a mistake in ch1 where I said that Rika's sister went to Heaven Academy. This is false, she was homeschooled.

http://sta.sh/01kmk2nmq45i
http://sta.sh/01nz6zkem8qr

I sensed BOOKS and I saw BOOKS, I am satisfied now.... thanks, though this is probably not meant to be one, but thanks for the Christmas Gift!

this is indeed meant to be a book.

I mean, not meant to be a Christmas gift lol, I know this is a book >.> Anyways, BOOKS mentioned within a BOOK is like the best!

So far the transition from describing the setting, to developing the first couple of plot points is going smoothly.

I look forward to seeing how you expand on them! ^^

thnx@Books and DDS

ch3 is edited now http://sta.sh/01kmk2nmq45i