Custom Ice Barrier support

Looking for more feedback and the two different Priestess effects is something I want to know. Which one would you rather have to play against. Also if you find any incorrectly writen text, plz let me know :3


If you control a face-up "Ice Barrier" monster, you can Special Summon this card from your hand in face-up Defense Position. If your opponent declares an attack against a face-up "Ice Barrier" monster: You can Special Summon this card from the hand, if you do negate the attack, then draw 1 card.


When this card is Normal Summoned: While you control another face-up "Ice Barrier" monster, you can tribute this card; Draw 2 cards. You can only Summon "Ice Barrier" monsters the turn you use this effect. If this card is sent to the Graveyard to activate a "Ice Barrier" card effect or is sent to the Graveyard by the effect of a "Ice Barrier" card: You can draw 1 card.


If this card is sent to the Graveyard to activate a "Ice Barrier" card effect or is sent to the Graveyard by the effect of a "Ice Barrier" card: Add 1 level 4 or lower "Ice Barrier" monster from your Deck to your hand. If this card is in your Graveyard: You can banish this card and a other "Ice Barrier" monster in the Graveyard; Then Special Summon from your Extra Deck 1 Synchro Monster whose Level equals the total original Levels of those 2 monsters you banished. (This Special Summon is treated as a Synchro Summon).


When this card is Normal Summoned: You can Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower "Ice Barrier" monster from your hand. If this card is sent to the Graveyard as a Synchro Material for the Summon of an "Ice Barrier" Synchro monster: You can Special Summon 1 level 5 or higher "Ice Barrier" monster from your Deck to the field in face-up Defense Position.


Once per turn: You can target 1 level 4 or lower "Ice Barrier" monster in your Graveyard; Special Summon it in face-up Defense Position. Its effects are negated. If this card is sent to the Graveyard to activate an "Ice Barrier" card effect or sent to the Graveyard by an effect of an "Ice Barrier" card; Special Summon this card in face-up Defense Position. You can only use each of the effects of "Bear Of The Ice Barrier" once per turn.


If your opponent controls more monsters than you do, you can Special Summon this card (from your hand). You can target 1 card on the field; Destroy that target. During either player's turn: When a "Ice Barrier" card is targeted by a card effect; Negate the activation, and if you do, destroy that card. You can only use 1 "Altala, Archer Of The Ice Barrier" effect per turn, and only once that turn.


If you control 2 or more "Ice Barrier" monsters, you can Special Summon this card (from your hand). During either player's Main Phase: You can send 1 level 8 or lower "Ice Barrier" monster from your Deck or hand to the Graveyard, if you do this card gains that monster's effects until the end of this turn (This is a Quick Effect). You can only use this effect of "Priestess Of The Ice Barrier" once per turn.


Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must first be Special Summoned (from your hand) by banishing 1 level 7 or higher"Ice Barrier" Monster from your Graveyard. You can: discard 1 "Ice Barrier" monster, to declare 1 card type (Monster, Spell, or Trap); that type of card effect(s) cannot be activated until the end of your opponent's next turn. This effect can be used only once while this card is face-up on the field. When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard: This card can make a second attack in a row. You can only control 1 "Herva, Swordswoman Of The Ice Barrier".


If you have exactly 4 "Ice Barrier" monsters in your Graveyard, you can Special Summon this card (from you hand). When you do: target up to 2 other face-up "Ice Barrier" monsters you control; the targeted monster(s) are unaffected by your opponents card effects as long as this card remains face-up. Neither player can Special Summon monsters. If this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard by a card effect or by battle: You can banish 1 card your opponent controls.



1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters.
When this card is Synchro Summoned: Draw 1 card for each level 5 or higher "Ice Barrier" monster you control. You can: send 1 "Ice Barrier" monster from your Deck to the Graveyard, then this cards level becomes the same as the monster you sent to the Graveyard. You can only use this effect of "Prince Of The Ice Barrier" Once per turn.


1 "Ice Barrier" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
When this card is Synchro Summoned: You can target up to 3 cards on the field; return the targeted card(s) to the hand. You can banish up to 2 cards from the Graveyard to target the same number of cards your opponent controls; destroy them. You can only use each effect of "Yuukan, Dragon Tamer Of The Ice Barrier" once per turn.


2 "Ice Barrier" Tuners + 1 or more non-Tuner Synchro monsters
Must be Synchro Summoned and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. This card cannot be targeted by card effects. Once per turn, during either player's turn: You can target 1 card on the field; it is unaffected by your opponents card effects until the end of this turn (This is a Quick Effect). This card can attack all monsters your opponent controls once each.


All "Ice Barrier" monsters you control gain 300 ATK. Any card(s) returned from your opponent side of the field to the Hand is banished instead. You can only use 1 of the following effects of "Temple Of The Ice Barrier" per turn, and only once that turn. 
● When you Normal or Special Summon an "Ice Barrier" Monster from your hand; You can Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower "Ice Barrier" monster from your Deck.  
● Once per turn you can discard 1 card from your hand; add 1 "Ice Barrier" monster card from your Deck to your hand.


When a Spell/Trap Card, or Monster effect, is activated and you control an face-up "Ice Barrier" Card: Discard 1 "Ice Barrier" monster from the hand to the Graveyard; negate the activation, and if you do, destroy that card, then add 1 "Ice Barrier" Card from your Deck to your hand, expect "Blizzard Of The Ice Barrier". You can only activate 1 "Blizzard Of The Ice Barrier" per turn


Once per turn during your Main Phase: you can target 2 "Ice Barrier" monster in your Graveyard; add 1 of the targeted cards to your hand and shuffle the other card into the Deck. If this card is destroyed by an opponent card effect and sent to the Graveyard: You can draw 1 card.

Last edited by KawaiiMiku on Mon Jul 20, 2015 10:57 am; edited 25 times in total (Reason for editing : Card and text editing)

i vote for priestess cuz boobs
but the synchro is broken imo
and the field spell too :O

One question to your synchro Mikuku, For the revealed "Ice Barriers" in the first effect,  u meant "Ice Barrier" monsters or "Ice Barrier" cards?


I will probably write a detailed report by tomorrow. For now, that's all I am going to ask/feedback.

Last edited by BOOKS! on Wed Jul 08, 2015 11:23 pm; edited 2 times in total

Field Spell OP, make the special summon from deck up to twice per turn, syncrho way OP, I would say change the one and only once that turn to once per duel. Other than that, all are really nice. My personal Fav would have to be blizzard. Negation and a search for Ice barriers? Yes please

BOOKS! wrote:

One question to your synchro Mikuku, For the revealed "Ice Barriers" in the first effect,  u meant "Ice Barrier" monsters or "Ice Barrier" cards?


I will probably write a detailed report by tomorrow. For now, that's all I am going to ask/feedback.

I fixed that, forgot to change it somewhere. Thanks for pointing it out :3 I'll also update the card picture towmarow.

DuskMage wrote:

Field Spell OP, make the special summon from deck up to twice per turn, syncrho way OP, I would say change the one and only once that turn to once per duel. Other than that, all are really nice. My personal Fav would have to be blizzard. Negation and a search for Ice barriers? Yes please

I know the field spell is strong, but why would I make it stronger from what it is atm? O.o 
I will either change the cost for Dragon Tamer or have a condition for the turn it's summoned back from the graveyard by it's own effect.

Leo wrote:

I liked the 1st one

what if  there was an ice barrier monster in ur graveyard , then you activate Call of the haunted or soul charge you can Ss it from ur hand and that will be a nice and power full plan to summon a stronger monster from ur extra deck especially this card is "tuner" >.>

for the 1st look i thought that those cards were real then i saw ur name typed on them

and i can say that all of them are good .. great job

Well Bear Of The Ice Barrier can be summoned if you use like Call Of The Haunted to bring 1 back. Acutelly Bear was ment to only be a good toolbox, but I added more attack to it, but you'll mainly just use it for xyz or synchro plays.

Thanks that means alot ^^

Ok Tsundere, here is the report I promised:

Bear: Pretty good effect. However, this type of card usually says "Special summon in Face-up Defense Position" (Especially with 1900 ATK like this) when SSed. Your choice to consider it or not.

Priestess: Shock Master type of effect OP. My only thing to be picky on this is that maybe add this limitation  of "You can only control one (face-up) "Priestess of the Ice Barrier". I understand that you added restriction to it's cute girl stun effect, so again, your choice to take this advice or not.

Dragon Tamer: First of all, you have a "," in front of the card name Miku :S fix it. This card is the only one I think about. Both of it's effects are bounce effect.......I feel that this synchro shud have Salvage effect/Plus hand card effect since, well even with these supports, Ice barriers does discard a lot. It will be nice if one of the bounce effects is a Plus hand cards effect.(I see u fixed the word I pointed out yesterday, good)

Temple: Effects are good on this one, I only have a problem with it's wording. I think since 2 effects here r continuous(the 400 ATK boost, the banish instead bounce) and 2 are ignition(Search, SS Ice Barrier) you shud put the Ignitions in two bullets after the wording: "You can only use one of the following effects of 'Temple...', and only once that turn." Ah right, also, it wud be nice if you can salvage from grave instead of Search from deck, since well uk medallion does the search alrdy.

Blizzard: I like this one the most, counting the art. Especially, the search effect, it maybe the first COUNTER TRAP with a search effect.Only thing I can be picky about is why you need a restriction of "Only one can b activated one turn"? Not like it can be abuse like "I-Barri".

TL;DR version: Sorry Tsundere Miku, I know I typed too much. I will say overall the cards are real good, tbh first time when I see them I thought they r real cards from KONMAI KONAMI......lol. Only MAJOR thing I see is the synchro, since well, I think it's better to add ammo from grave then bounce opponent's cards, especially when u have the priestess to stun effects. Sorry if u had to read all this. :S

Thanks alot for commenting, I've changed the text on all cards aswell as adding 1 more, I'd like to get feed back in upcoming cards. Also having someone help me playtest the cards would be really nice :3

You already know my thoughts on these cards . I like them, a lot.

Scooty, don't make OP cards >.> they r evil.

Shhhhhh >_>

Tsundere.....there are few MAJOR words you would like to correct:

 Dragon Tamer:
You can only the following effect of ", Dragon Tamer Of The Ice Barrier" once per turn, and only once that turn. (You don't need this part)
Once per turn If this card is in your Graveyard: You can discard 1 "Ice Barrier" card from your hand; If you Special Summon this card from the Graveyard. {You can only special summon this card with this effect once per turn.} If you Special Summoned ", Dragon Tamer Of The Ice Barrier" {with} this {effect} way, this card cannot cannot untill the end of your opponents next turn.
(cannot what >.>)

Temple:
Once per turn you can discard 1 card from you{r} hand; add 1 "Ice Barrier" monster card from your Deck to your hand.


Blizzard:
You can only {activate} use 1 "Blizzard Of The Ice Barrier" per turn and only once that turn.



There are a few minor issues as well, but I will leave them alone now. GJ Tsundere!! (`w`)b

Baks using proper PSCT :')

Jv, why you trying to say that I don't use proper PSCT usually >.>?

Updated card texts and added two new Ice Barrier cards, Spirit and Paladin of the ice barrier

Love em' that Monsuno bear tho .

Love the arcetype custom support, check "rage of Bahamut" for some art.

Ok cute girl, here is the feedback:


Spirit: ummm, looks nice, even the effects may look like they doubled, but they will really let you think which effect to use depends on the situation, so rly not a problem.


Paladin: This is a very powerful card, perhaps even balance breaker, OP yo. Searchable via ROTA, Medallion, Salvageable thru Rescue, warrior returning alive. Effect can drag out 2 ice barriers monsters, pretty strong, it's ok tho since its does -1 hand card.


Bear: By this text you mean it can ss only when its send to graveyard by effect by not cost.......however, you have the other effect to cover it up, so it's ok.


Priestess: Hmm, that would mean spell/trap cards that are alrdy face up can activate their effect during stun......BUT, this is exactly why it wont stun your Temple and Rescue.....nicely thought.


Dragon Tamer: I think this card can b a bit stronger.....but it's ok I guess since other Ice Barrier synchros r broken alrdy. "Yokan".....hmm maybe you have no idea am I saying but u meant "余寒"(Overflowing/Leftover cold) instead of "予感"(feelings of prediction) right?


Temple: Perhaps last effect change to discard 1 ss one from deck? or Add one from grave/deck? Other than that, it's all good.


Blizzard/rescue: .....these two I have nothing to b picky on :S Gj Tsu~n



That's about it, there may be some small wording problems I overlooked but it's ok, since they r small, Nice cards Tsu~ndere, nice cards.

Cool fixes, its still kinda op but really cool :D