Deck Originality 3/5
It's an unique Burning Abyss build, sadly it's not good.

Deck Size 4/5
40-15-15 3 Searchers 1 Allure of Darkness

Siding Skills 0/5
It can hardly be called a side deck

Use of cards 3/5
He did not know his effect well

Control of duel 3/10
G1 - Won by Summoning BLS [Had no Control]
G2 - All me
G3 - Won after using Dark Hole [Damn it Wisdom!]

Ruling/Misplays 1/10
He was too rash, that often led to him losing card advantage

Result of duel 4/10
I lost 2-1

Total score = 20/50
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