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made myself a new sig Bi0xhg
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made myself a new sig 2lxto3m
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made myself a new sig Rixkyr

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Last edited by Tomoko Kuroki on Fri Nov 01, 2013 4:48 am; edited 4 times in total

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Everything is just, I dunno, wrong. Except the background, it's not that good, but it could have turned out a lot worse


2/10

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Background kinda screws with the text, and the faded version of the render.

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Your light-source is on the wrong side , renders "eho" looks weird because of it .
You have to work on your text...Arial font isn't good for anything but writing...

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remade twice

made myself a new sig 2lxto3m

made myself a new sig Rixkyr

dunno which is best

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Render doesn't go well with the background (besides from the obvipus rear-focused point of view), text is disturbing my sight on this.

A good step from your previous works, but still 2/10 at best.

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Your light source's a flare this time , that surely is better than the last one.
As for the text i would remove it ...
4/10 now (~-,-[Credits to Gianus])~ .

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