Well its a bit ok.
Problems
1. high monster count
2. 3 bubblemans (you don't run 3 bubbles when your monster count is over 10, clogges hand)
3. 3 Gawayn (you only have Neos Alius so its not really great to run 3.)
4. No super poly!? (at least main one.)
5. runs chimeratech but no sight of Cyber Dragon
6. this is not really a problem, more like a suggestion. Get Paladynamo (Paladius) he finally came out for the TCG
7. runs Zenmaines. why? (dont give me "I have a snowman and grandmole" cuz thats just only 2 cards
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8. runs Grandmole (u dont use him in a deck that contains Bubble for xyz engine. ruins the speed of your deck.)
9. does not run CED. (this is more of an opinion than a problem. Best trap at the moment.)
Well there you go, please don't hate me for criticism. ::Monkey40::