Decent, except it could use more lights. It's a bit of dark. Also the text should be more blinded in. As for the BG, it's not bad, but it can be better. The C4D can be placed in a place that serves the flow a bit, perhaps more than one layer one behind the render, and the other in front of it then change locations of it so they look like flowing from below, or from above in the same direction.
BreezyMon Jan 07, 2013 10:55 pm