my first few sigs

Hey guys these are the first few sigs i made pls rate them and tell me how i could improve thanx

Kill the monotone...some of your signatures are over sharpened..make clipped mask texts.Your sigs are some how bit messy and have no flow..also no clear focal. but Great for first try..I rated it bit hardly to improve

Ya thanks :D
Neji tought me :D

Well you shouldn't be taught from neji xD..j/k
Ya i knew that..the style is almost the same but his has more organized effects.

EJ Your tuts always have the Violet and Orange Gmap
Then the B&W
That lways makes it monotone =/

heres a new one i made for Neji

alll your signs look the same still something differs from your sign so i'll rate a 8.5/10

heres a new one that i made

i wo'nt say it's bad cuz it's not .. but i didn't like the effect on image .. also the blue line is bad .. the font is good but the style fo that font not so good... my rate is 6/10

My Latest

i liked the sig of Scorpion u used but the Blue color effect wasnt a good choice of colors.
And for the Sasuke cursed mark with those ........ eyes XD its not bad but the text is relatively small and its color isnot so good too but way to go you are improving greatly atleast u left back your oversharpening ^^ .

Thanks Flamesdevil heres an updated version of my last sig as well as a few new ones

i like 3 and 4 it's good some how .. but the others so bad pal .. for 3 and for (rate:7/10) and 1 - 4 (5/10).

Err Jesse Im not sure what youre talking about
I mean hes been showing some great improvment.
Ill give the Sasuke FTW sig an 8 and the others 6-7's.

Here's my latest

dude effects are bit messy...and random placed.
Text isn't so good....sharpen your focal abit and fix lightning then it'd be ok

alrite heres an improved version

heres a new sig i just finished

not bad sasuke it's your best sig yet guess you decided to take my advice
as for the sig make the border smaller kill the text put it inside the sig
get rid of the bubble c4d they ruin the flow of sig use c4ds that has a nice flow with the render the light source is good colours are not bad the focal is a tad bit sharpend

Thanks for the advice renji and yea xD i looked up a couple of tuts which really helped

heres another couple of sigs ive been working on

The one on the top is totally simple sorry to say.
Just a C4D youre render Text and a little fractal at the right. 5/10

Second sig:
Reduce the texts size and try to add the custom gradient maps to it and some warn photofilters.

umm neji thanks for the advice but as for the ryu sig there was a lot more to it then that xD but anyway heres my newest sig

Remove the thing that surrounds the lens flare...move it closer to the gun and remove that blue C4D placed with the gun
Also the text sucks
7/10

thanks for the tips neji after u made ur jessica alba and megan fox sigs i wanted to see if i could make one on a celebrity so i did tell me what u think

mhmm lightning is abused...text is ewww (kill it and dun use zero font in RL sigs)...fix lightning and fix colours..it'd be ok

That and the blending isnt special at all
C4D is damn visible(Not when behind the render)
6/10

check the face looks like the sun on his face .. remove that light also remove that font you use it in all your signatures and give it a style a normal white font isn't that good.

umm Jesse isnt that exactly the same thing that EJ and Neji said and therefore completely redundant and unnecessary?

heres my latest