Signature (Done as a request for Utopia Ray on DN forums)

I put a lot of effort into this one, what do you think , did it work out?

Hmm it looks pretty nice only i think its too bright in right side... also i dont know why but i dont like how text looks. Im just saying what i think :D

damn bro im really impress lol the reason alot of people didnt take that request cause of that bad render but u made it work nice job bro

Maybe darken the right side a bit but other than that it looks really good

the lightining above head and text is bad other than is a good sig

I think you should take away the red border.

The text is a bit off and you could make the border going down the right a bit smaller or remove it completely and put it down the bottom.

Lighting is also a bit too bright. I like it though ::Monkey1::