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Now I know this is bad but I really tried my hardest (so please don't hate)


Note this is a work of fiction (I have never been to Anzo's office nor do I want to 
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This is actually fine, if you keep working and writing you may be a good novelist one day.

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Maybe take a look at the one I wrote as a Slice of Life http://www.duelacademy.net/t46453-heaven-academy-a-da-novel

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Well that's not that bad, tho i lose the plot of it Razz could use some better meaning to your going to Anzo's office, since this was kinda pointless. 

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It kinda lacks a plot(And a certain important character that REALLY could be in it)
And I don't get why you explain this is about "a certain girl that is not me" but yet still you use 1st person kinda view(sorry not familiar with literature related words/expressions in English) to describe the story
And what annoys me most is the fact that you call yourself horrible at simply everything DA the novel (i'm a horrible novelist)  576792747

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Pro tip: Gala should be the main character

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I think you have a better chance at making short jokes lol, in so many meanings

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