I stopped posting here for a while so my latests

Didn't smudge in long time so yeah..my attempt :


Practising lightning in all of them :




Start of a collab (the other partner hasn't finished it yet..)


wanted it to look different


Collab between me and Kaito_deadman


Last edited by EJ on Wed Feb 16, 2011 3:13 pm; edited 1 time in total

Why they are so small? :S

cuz i got wrong links, fixed now

It looks you smudged too much and need a little depth. If you gave a little depth then the reason that I can't notice is this much smudge.

Well you said I'm working about lightning so... Did you notice his right of face look shiny. You should make right side darker. You can't find renders as same lightning always. You have to change it. For example you can brush it's right of face by his skin color. Anyways other stuff about lightning is good.

This one is best lightning effect. It look very good but his face; especially eyes. :/ I can't see edges to help to see me his eyes.

Lightning is good but it looks like you moved light source a little to left. :S

This one look good but lines are everywhere on his costume. You should shine them also. If they are not shiny in original station of render, don't care this comment. In addition left side is very empty really.
And yes it look very different -.-

It's really good one as tag but text position. just a little more right and done. For lightning, nothing to say. :/

About nero tag...it's too shiny cuz lightsource is too strong, so ya
and about the futuristic soldier tag...it's start of collab, it's not finished lawl
and ya i find text sucky on last one..but i'm not one who added it D:

all cool but that "negative styled" one xD

Below the ocean one is just WOW!!! It looks so perfect.... only if i could do such a thing.
You have to make a tutorial for that one

Ok, my comments,, 1st,2nd (very good blend, and lighting) , 3rd (over lightened, too plain, background is very,, idk not good?) ,4th (very good, but render is soo over sharpened!), 5th,7th (just great) , 6th ( don't do that effect again ^^) .. Anyways great work.. and keep on!