Ichigo hollow D:

Soon I'll make one of the last hollow form :3

The Right Side Is So Random XD, Anyways, Lighting Looks Kind of Forced and for me the Text Kills it a bit. Btw, I think you should remove the Green Stuff in his left shoulder just to show some depth. Just in My Opinion, Borders Are Icky D: Other than those, The Flow Looks Great(Except for the Weird Right Part), And Yeah X3

Ray1500 wrote:

The Right Side Is So Random XD, Anyways, Lighting Looks Kind of Forced and for me the Text Kills it a bit. Btw, I think you should remove the Green Stuff in his left shoulder just to show some depth. Just in My Opinion, Borders Are Icky D: Other than those, The Flow Looks Great(Except for the Weird Right Part), And Yeah X3

agreed 100%
use diff color text, diff font or no text at all

I like it very much.
Ok the green stuff is not so good and the next too but the rest is fine.