DA -.-

i made this .. is't good >_>? its more like "prototype" .. and am sure gona need an advices so i can make it better and repalce the bad parts ^_^.






P.S : dont comment like 7/10 or 5/10 .. this is not for rating .. its for comments and advices.

dont know if you remember but zane left DA in GX episonds -.- or somthing like that

Lol why is always Bastion in middle where is Syrus or any girld (Alexis )
Why did you add only 1 guy from season 2 ? forgot name crystal beasts
I like it but not the char line up

misawa in the middle because is is looking stright
one character of seasons 2(Jesse Anderon) .. who should i add and who should i remove?
and whats the "char line up" ? how should i put them?

My suggestion kill those lines thingy on the render. Front of jaden and chazz.

i'll use that..give me the psd
good lookin, needs a few twists which i'll take care on like focusin the lightning and needs more blended schemes and ofcourse remove text.
but hey i'd take care of that..

Hey EJ i think we had this long ago ))

Char line up
Chazz Syrus Jaden Bastion Alexis

Or put the top ones

Syrus in obe suit Chazz Jaden Zane Atticus
Or let the one you have now but remove crowler and add the destiny hero guy

no renders fit in perfectly..atleast imo

EJ you nub make a banner yourself! :O When no one likes this one either everyone will blame it on Yugi. xD

jess side is awesome, crowler side is bad

crowler and chazz's renders aren't good; other than thsi it is good

I like it i think the color are very nice.

EJ: You will make it worst xD

so, lines up like this

Jesse - Jaden - Baston - Chazz - Alexis ?

gimme tha psd, rawr..!!
alexis sux, crawler is original

Sucks imo.
I really mean it.

The bg is too dark, and chazz and crowler renders are LQ.
Text is bad and you shouldn't add those C4Ds up the renders,
Can be fixed tough

dunno whats you are talking about but i didnt add any C4Ds -.- ..... any artist will know that i used brushes and coloured BG xD


EJ: i will send it to you latter
Fenix: nice comment -.-

The current 1 is simple and better, sorry yugi ^^

Well, there's a small mistakes in the motto (some1 correct me if i'm wrong) :

Expert prove their skills, beginners improve it

Yugi Muto wrote:

dunno whats you are talking about but i didnt add any C4Ds -.- ..... any artist will know that i used brushes and coloured BG xD


EJ: i will send it to you latter
Fenix: nice comment -.-

Well I'm sorry Expert artist but those things above the renders looks like Lightened C4D o.o
And btw I don't get why you get so angry by a critic, If you are getting hurt by every comment I post even if it's true, sorry didn't want to be mean just to help
Besides why you ask for CnC's if you get like this every time I give you advices..

Thanks for the lesson, but who said am angry. and btw .. my name is Yugi not Expert artist in case you didn't noitc.

Idk whats your problem i think the edditing is nice.
9/10