Neji wrote: Kandy.JPEG wrote: Kill that font ; A;
tfw i feel that the text actually makes it look more complete despite how bad it is LOL
It's better than a few of your works
Try being more subtle with your effects/adjustments/lighting. It's a bit harsh in places
Kind of agree with Neji on this one, the font helps the flow in this case.
I believe it's a step forward, you're getting more used to adjustment settings; though I'd recommend removing that litting curved cyan line infront of your render, it's attracting too much focus against your focal point.
KIU