A Yu-Gi-Oh adventure

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EPISODE 1

-Damn I'm so bored.What should i do?Nothing special on Tv. Maybe I should check if there is anything new in DA.

I opened the computer, opened Winap for some music and started listening Three Days Grace.Then I opened Ares and accesed DA forum.
A message apeared.
-WTF..what's this ? It looked like a questionnaire.
I started to fill it with my name and all things, some questions were very strange.After i finished it Another window apeared:
Fill this bellow
-User name:
3 best friends that know how to play Yu-gi-oh
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I didn't know what it was for so I filled it like this:

-User name:Kira Amadeus
3 best friends that know how to play Yu-gi-oh
+Kisame Alex
+Paznicull Razvan
+Paznicull Tiby
After I finished with this, a strange light blined me, I could barelly see and a window apeared in wich I pressed ENTER.

I woke up on grass.
-I think I fainted. What is this place ? Am I dreaming?
I was a little scared I had something on my arm.On it it was written "World translater".I started to look around, there were kids like me lieing on the ground everywhere. This scared me most.
-Was I kidnapped by aliens?
At first everyone was scared but after a half an hour we started to recognize some people.I saw Alex and 2 twin brothers that looked very familiarly. I went with Alex to the twin boys and asked them if they're names are Tiby and Razvan.
-Hi are eighter of you named Razvan or Tiby?
-Lol yes how did you guessed?
-I'm Kira Amadeus and this is my friend Kisame Alex.
-Glad to talk to you face to face.Its way better then talking on messinger.
-Do eighter of you two know where we are?
-No we were going at a friend of ours when we heard a strange voice saying: "I have found you". We both heard it. It was strange ,since then we can't remember how we got here, I think we felt unconscious.
-Did any of you two recived a questionnaire?
-No,why are you asking?
-I recived one and filled it with our names.I didn't know what it was
for.
I started telling them every thing I could remember from the questionnaire.
-Beside this I can't remember anything else lets talk with the others.
-Hi do you remember how you got here?
-No, none of us does. Some of us remember a questionnaire wich we filled it and after that we woke up on the ground as you can see.
-Lets all search the aria maybe we can find anything that can remind us something or better a way home.
We started searching and 10 minutes later we found a place.
-Lol it looks like an academy from Yu-gi-oh GX. It really is DA.
Hey guys I think I know were we are.
Everyone was looking at me waiting for the answer.
-We are at Duel Academy!!

TO BE CONTINUED

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Thx are there any more mistakes?

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Last time on my adventure:

I founded out that four of my friends that have dissapeared, were in the Yu-Gi-Oh world and were helping a bad guy to rule the world. I was very shocked. Hope that I will be able to save them in time before they do anything that they will regret later.

"I will never lose to someone like you, a person that seeks power, and brain washes people to join him." Said I being sure of myself.
"You are getting on my nerves." Said the mysterious bad guy.
"Where is everybody?" Said someone from outside.
"In here, in the hall." Said Chancellor Sheppard.
"Hi everybody, how is everyone, long time no see Kira Amadeus." Said a boy with a cloak.
"It's me Jaden." Said the boy while discovering his face.
"Jaden you're just in time." Said Chancellor Sheppard.
"I brought some old friends too." Said Jaden while Alexis, Syrus, Chazz and Bastion where coming in.
"So we're just in time for Holloween, right?" Said Jaden while looking at my friends and the one that brain washed them.
"So what is the emergecy Chancellor Sheppard?" Said Syrus being more confident that we usually know him.
"This guy in front of Kira Amadeus came here to destroy Duel Academy and to rule in both ,this world and Kira's."Said Chancellor Sheppard while pointing at the bad guy.
"Then, why are Kira's friends in those suits standing by the bad guy?" Asked Chazz puzzled.
"They were brain washed by him and he wants to do that to me too." I explained.
Then Jaden's face changed, his eyes turned like he was possessed by Yubel.
"I'll be your opponent." Said Jaden with a strange voice.
"Ok and my helpers here will duel your companions." Said the bad guy.
Five duels started I didn't know what to do so I standed still and watched them duel.
First Chazz won vs Tibi and he regained conscious.
"Where am I ? Amadeus? Duel Academy?" Said Tibi puzzled.
"So the brain wash is gone after you beat them." Said Chazz fast.
"Ok guys lets win all of the duels." Said Jaden with his strange voice.
Razvan lost to Bastion, and he regained conscious too.
Alexis lost to Alexa and Alex won over Syrus.
"You got half of your friends back but this won't stop me!! " Said the bad guy confident.
Jaden did his best and lost to the bad guy.
"Now you will be serving me." Said the bad guy.
"Damn I lost, sorry Kira I couldn't save your friends." Said Jaden gloomy.
"What!! why aren't you under my spell?" Said the bad guy scared.
"Thats simple, becouse his inner spirit, Yubel, protects him." Said Chancellor Sheppard.
"Now I will fight you Kira Amadeus." Said the bad guy while laughing.
"But I don't have any deck." Said I worried.
"No problem, here Kira Amadeus, take this deck that was given to me to protect it."
Said Chancellor Sheppard.
"I think that you will be able to protect it more than me." Said Sheppard.
"But you have to be carefull not to fall in its darkness couse this deck can destroy the world."
I was really terrified, knowing that I might fall into the darkness and hurt my friends.
"Ok then lets duel!" Said I confident.
After the duel started a black armour apeared on me and everyone exept Jaden were surprised.
Everyone was looking at our duel, to see the deck that was given to me, hopping that I will win.
"Chanceller Sheppard where did you get that deck?" Asked Jaden.
"It was given to me after I won the tournament when I was your age, that Alexa and Kira Amadeus won last year." Said Sheppard proudly.
"And why did you give it to Amadeus now?" Asked Jaden gelous.
"I didn't know who deserves it most, Alexa or Amadeus, and since now he is the one standing by the good side I gived it to him." Said Sheppard.
"But if something goes wrong and he falls in the darkness, I'm counting on you to bring him back in the good side." Said Sheppard worried.
"I'll do my best, but for now lets pray he doesn't." Said Jaden while looking at his deck.
"Now lets watch the duel." Said Sheppard staring at the duel.
Everything went well I was dominating my opponent,but something strange kept calling me from the deck and I didn't know what it was thill..
"Draw !" Said I.
"Whats the matter did you got a dead draw?" Asked the duelist.
After I drew I had a great monster in my hand it was The Wicked Avatar.This is one of the voices I kept hearing.
"I sacrifice three of my monsters to call forth The Wicked Avatar" Said I proudly.
But after the monster was summoned I lost my conciousness.
"What is the matter what happened?" Asked Sheppard.
"That means that I win!" Said the duelist laughing as I got up and my eyes were white.

To Be Continued..

Oh C'mon i hate this lol "To Be Continued Part"
Just Like when i watch something and im excited and then boom the episode is over xD

But i really like it and u did a really good job thanks alot for this

Cant wait for the next part ;]

Last time on my adventure:

All I remember is that I was dueling that bad guy that brain washed my friends and that I heard something in my Cards.
So read this chapter to find out more .

"Now I have the strongest duelist under my command." Said the bad guy laughing.
"No, Amadeus get a grip." Yelled Chanceller Sheppard.
"Jaden as I told you now is the time for you to bring Amadeus back in the light." Said Sheppard decided.
"I will try my best." Said Jaden.
"I already beated you slacker." Said the bad guy that brain washed me.
"Alexa keep him busy, or better kill them all." Said the bad guy while he, I and Alex were heading toward the exit.
"I'll beat you Alexa ." Said Jaden.
They started to duel. Everybody was hoping that Alexa will lose. And in the end Jaden won and Alexa felt unconscious.
"Get Ms. Fonda here with a stretcher." Said Chanceller Sheppard to Chazz.
Fonda brings over a stretcher and Alexis helps Fonda put Alexa on it. Everyone runs next to the stretcher as Fonda pushes it towards the hospital wing. When they get to a room, Fonda and Alexis put Alexa on the bed.
Alexa opens her eyes and..
"Were am I ? I was going to buy something for my boyfriend Amadeus." Said Alexa scared.
"You are at Duel Academy, what do you remember exept this?" Asked Ms Fonda.
"I was walking down the street when a guy with a Mask apeared and chalanged me to a duel, I remember that I lost and that he was looking for Amadeus." Said Alexa.
"Anything else?"
"No, I can't remember anything else." Said Alexa while looking in the room.
"Where is Amadeus is he safe?" Asked Alexa.
Chanceller Shepperd entered the room and...
"I'm sorry Alexa but Amadeus isn't with us anymore." Said Sheppard disappointed.
"What do you mean where is he ?" Screamed Alexa while a tear was going down her face.
"He was beaten by the Mask guy. He was trying to save you and Alex. Now Alex and Amadeus are with him and Razvan and Tibi are in the other room in same shape as you." Explained Sheppard to Alexa.
"I'm going after him." Said Alexa determined.
"No, you can't leave the bed right now. You must rest and when you recover complitely you can go." Said Ms Fonda.
"Lets let her sleep." Said Alexis.
After 30 minutes.
"Ms Fonda can you go and check on Alexa to see if she is all right?" Asked Sheppard.
"Of course I'm going right away." Said Ms Fonda.
..
"Chanceller Sheppard she isn't in the room, she might have left to search for him." Said Ms Fonda worried.
"Kids these days, we better tell Jaden that if he finds her he should bring her back." Said Sheppard.
...
"Jaden form 2 teams and go search for Amadeus, oh and take this card !" Said Sheppard while he gaved Prohibition.
"Use it wisely." Said Sheppard while Jaden was leaving.
..
"Ok now Alexis, Chazz come with me. Bastion, Syrus your going with Zane." Said Jaden While Zane enters the Duel Academy.
"But my brother isn't here." Said Syrus.
"Yes he is; he is at the entrance." Said Jaden showing the entrance.
After an hour of search the second team :Zane, Syrus and Bastion found the Masked guy with Alex and me.
..
"Guys look its Zane and the others." Said Jaden while running toward them.
"They are unconscious." Said Jaden standing next to Zane.
"Guys, guys can you hear me, wake up!" Said Jaden.
Then Zane opened his eyes and says:
"I couldn't save Amadeus."
"It's ok bro , rest now."Said Jaden angry.
"Alexis stay here with them! Chazz go and fine Ms Fonda and bring her here." Said Jaden.
"What will you do?" Asked Chazz.
"I'm going to save them." Said Jaden while his eyes changed like Yubels.
"Jaden don't go I don't wana lose you again." Said Alexis.
Then Jaden goes at Alexis, kisses her lips and says.
"I'll be back, don't forget that." Said Jaden while Alexis flushed.
"I'm going to bring them back." Said Jaden to him self while running towards the Abandoned dorm.

To Be Continued

oooo i see some romance here alredy, Grate job my friend!

Nice adventure man.. keep it up @o@ .

Last time on my adventure:

Alexa lost to Jaden and she was sent to the Hospital wing of Duel Academy. After a while Alexa ran from the hospital room to search for me.
Meanwhile Jaden formed 2 teams to search for me too and Alexa. One of the teams got beaten (not Jadens) and after Jaden founded them, he went by him helf to the Abandoned dorm knowing that, that's the only place I could be along with Alex and the Masked guy.

"I have to hurry before it is to late." Said Jaden while running.
..
Shortly after he reached The Abandoned Dorm. Where in the hall he founded me and Alex...
"I'll duel you first." Said Alex.
"Ok lets do this and Amadeus you're next." Said Jaden confident.
"What makes you so sure you'll beat me." Said Alex mad.
"I will win couse I have the light with me." Said Jaden while looking at his duel disk.
The duel between them started, but it didn't last for long couse Jaden managed to summon 3 Fusions and won in 3 turns.
"I told you I will win." Said Jaden smilig.
Then Alex felt on the floor. Shortly after Alexis and Chazz arrived.
"You're just in time guys, take Alex to the hospital wing." Said Jaden to Alexis and Chazz.
After they left with Alex, Alexa shows up with a duel disk and said:
"Jaden leave this to me, maybe I can can bring him back." Said Alexa with bright eyes.
"No, Alexa you're not ready yet, you can't duel in this state, you must go back to DA'S Hospital wing and rest."
Said Jaden worried about her condition.
"No, I have to stand up for him, like he standed when I was brain washed." Said Alexa.
"Then I'm not a person who stands in the way of love."
The duel between me and Alexa started.
I could have beaten here but, the Evil me wanted to destroy here. In a few turns I managed to summon all The Wicked Gods but I couldn't atack her couse she had Swords of reaviling light. After four more turns she had 2000 life points and I had 8000 life points. She didn't had any monsters only five seted cards in the Spell/Trap zone. So I atacked, first she used mirror force and I used Solemn judgement and she activated hers. We had 4000(me)-1000(she). I activated my set Mystical space typhoon and destroyed another trap card. Now I tought she didn't had any other good traps, so I atacked with Dreadroot, but she activated Magic Cylinder and won. I crashed on the floor and my armour disappeared.
"Amadeus!!" Yelled Alexa while rushing towards me.
"Amadeus wake up!! Wake up !! Come back to us. Don't live me." Said Alexa crying.
After that the bad guy disappeared in darkness.
"Jaden lets get him to the Hospital wing."
They took me to a room in the Hospital wing.
Everyone was surrounding me, Zane, Jaden, Chazz, Alexis which was standing near Jaden and holding his hand, Ms Fonda and Chancellor Sheppard and others.
"I'm afraid we lost him." Said Ms Fonda while looking down.
Everyones face changed from sad to devastated and Alexa started to cry again. Everyone tried to settle her. Alexis started to cry on Jadens shoulder, the room was so quiet that you could only hear the tears felling.
After a minute of crying Alexa kissed my lips and a tear felt on my cheek.
"Ms Fonda ! I think he moved." Said Alexa.
"I'm sorry but he died, his heart stopped." Said Ms Fonda while she checked my pulse.
"Wait, I can feel his pulse now."
Alexa started to smile with tears on her cheeks.
"Where am I?" I asked.
"Youre back!" Said Alexa.
"I'm sorry Alexa I was seeing everything, but I couldn't control my body."
"It's ok my love, I'm just glad you came back."
"How could I resist to such a beauty."
"Now you have to rest Amadeus and Alexa." Said Chancellor Sheppard.
"Tomorrow you'll have to beat the Masked guy."
We wen't to bed Alexa was sleeping in the bed next to me facing me. I didn't slept all night I only looked at her thinking that I was hurting her in the duel. That night I promised my self that I will not hurt her never again.
The next day.
"Rise and shine sleepy heads." Said Jaden and Alexis to us.
After five minutes I told Alexa to stay in the room with Alexis and promised her that I will come back safe and sound.
"Jaden lets get going."
We headed to the Abandoned Dorm where the Masked guy was.

To Be Continued

Last time on my adventure:

I lost to Alexa and almost died, but I don't know how I woke up in the Hospital wing surrounded by everyone.
The next day I went with Jaden to the Abandoned Dorm to finish what I started before I was brain washed.
We got there and the Masked guy was waiting for us.
"So, I won once, what makes you so sure tht you will win?" Said the Masked guy.
"Last time you won couse I couldn't control my god cards, but now I think I'm ready." Said I.
"Lets do this."
The duel started :



In the end I won.
"How is this posible for you to control such power ?" Said the Masked guy while crushing on the floor.
"Look his mask broke! Who is he?" Asked Jaden.
"It's George !" Said I while staring at him.
"Lets take him to the Hospital wing!"
After a while we got to the Hospital wing and he woke up.
"I just wanted power so that everyone would respect me." Said George barely moving.
"You are wrong, respect doesn't come from power. You must earn it by respecting others. You will only be respected only if
you respect the ones that are surrounding you." Said I wisely.
"You might be right. I'm so shamed for the things I did. You are a good person and I apologize, even if you won't forgive me."
"I already did it."
"So friends?" Asked I.
"Sure, but I owe you big time."
After that we stayed in Duel Academy to enjoy 2 more days of dueling.
We went home after 2 days and my relationship with Alexa changed a lot, we were more closer than ever and beside, I gained
another friend !
After we got home I explained everything to Alex, Tibi and Razvan and they understanded everything, in fact they weren't upset at all and everything was fine.
"We are home at last." Said I.
"Alexa I forgot to give you something."
"What?"
"Here take this as a gift for our anniversary."
"Thank you very much, I was brain washed when I was going to the shop to get you something, but I don't have anything now."
"I'll buy something nice for you tomorrow."
"There is no need as long as I have you, beside me."

And we lived to a great age.
The End.

How do you like this one is it better than the first? Last episode was kinda short

''si-am incalecat pe-o sa si v-am spus povestea asa''-i'm letting you kira to translate this expression;)).8/10 because :i think you can do better than this.In my opinion it suits you way better a story more realistic.You don;t have to get everyone brain washed to spice the plot.
P.S.:can you tell me your source of inspiration:))?(if you had one?)

The ideea came while I wasn't able to sleep and I always wished it was true when I was little don't think I'm nuts but i'd like it to be true now especially Alexa

ahh :D if only this we're real life xD i would wish i would be teleported to DA or something xD