Not satisfied with how this one turned out

Not too happy with the end result, but i couldn't get it to do any better.


Advice/feedback appreciated

Strong colors, no light source and no depth.

it looks like it's all one layer squashed together, and there isn't much of a focal point or a flow

flyinghigh wrote:

it looks like it's all one layer squashed together, and there isn't much of a focal point or a flow

That^^ and a poor choice of colors