Please don't post if you're gonna say "Not your best" or "Don't like it" or "It's not my taste". Only post real CnC if you're gonna post at all. If you can't tell me how to improve, I don't want to hear it. Thanks.
It could use less light on the render, or add more light to the BG. Plus usually in a tag that has a shoot-gun in it you should show the shoot-gun not hide it.