Accel Faster

Got some nice new c4ds and decided to try them out, so awesome. I like the outcome but need text font (and color) suggestions.

CNC

The BG C4D isn't centered, I can see the core down her shoulder, that's wrong. I know topaz clean is cool, i dig it myself; however, in this signature it doesn't fit. You need to show the flow "indirectly" topaz from the other hand emphasize it and changes your focal points. Kill the text, it doesn't fit at all, and it's ruining whatever flow you have left in your signature. Could use stronger light effects and more color gradient and perhaps some curves and levels. It feels like if you just put dem c4ds place ur render and call it a signature e.e

Anzo why you so gender blind >_> it's a HE, Silver Crow is a male character. It already has those I added a bit more in V2 that I am posting now. No anzo, I try to find find the best bg for the render i can do.

V2:

Now It's too much yellow

V1 gave a much better vibe than V2 did. V2 just seems lazy in visual aspects. Focal points in V2 are much better however; without the text it makes you focus specifically on Crow.

V1
8/10
V2
6.5/10