Hollow Ichigo

Its been a while since i made something for my pleasure so here it is,my latest piece Enjoy.



P.S i would like an good cNc please

Ima CnC like this cuz I'm bored.
Render: It's choppy and low quality. I think you over-sharpened it. The light source brings it's quality down also. I don't exactly like the full-body of this render.
Lighting: It's decent. Use a more natural lighting rather than soft brush. The lighting from the fractal is nice.
Background: Kinda odd and LQ, It doesn't exactly fit the render and it makes it harder to blend the render.
Text: It's aight. I have no comments.
Blending/compo: Blending is poor since the render is rendered bad. Also it just doesn't fit. The overall composition isn't that well. Allot more can be added to help the sig.
KIU.

Looks nice. good job.

Darkneji12 wrote:

Ima CnC like this cuz I'm bored.
Render: It's choppy and low quality. I think you over-sharpened it. The light source brings it's quality down also. I don't exactly like the full-body of this render.
Lighting: It's decent. Use a more natural lighting rather than soft brush. The lighting from the fractal is nice.
Background: Kinda odd and LQ, It doesn't exactly fit the render and it makes it harder to blend the render.
Text: It's aight. I have no comments.
Blending/compo: Blending is poor since the render is rendered bad. Also it just doesn't fit. The overall composition isn't that well. Allot more can be added to help the sig.
KIU.

1. about the blending yoour right but if anything else adds to this is just gonna ruin it more.
2. chazz not all lightning is always to be come from top.
3. erase some parts of the fractals cuz makes the black c4d on some part bad like greenish black color
4. it is oversharpen
5. the most this is missing is flow

yusei33: -.- .. small note, did you check the render he used? he has original top light .. means he can't make a fake light source from any other side.

Now about my Pro CnC, the signature is cool from the first look, but when we go deeper it miss few things like for example, you didn't use Level or Exposure witch is why you lack shadows and deep effects. Your C4D is pretty much awesome it self, but when you look at it at the same time you look to the light source and render it lack flows like yusei33 said, kill the text, generally text always ruins Artworks when you use C4D within your Artwork (not like using it on a stock).
Try to make the C4Ds near your render and add some darkness to the BG and around the siggy borders from both sides and the buttom then use Exposure with some Pin Light White Brush on top and reduce opacity until you get something sexy. :d

true but he could alway do a little clipping mask and add a little lighting on ichigos back
where the blalck parts are